tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post5555911835771789169..comments2024-03-28T20:19:01.074-04:00Comments on Kestril's Rhythms and Groove: Effortless Rommyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-51569378154793470972015-12-06T18:42:10.255-05:002015-12-06T18:42:10.255-05:00Wow, I can't imagine being that fit, ha ha! Gr...Wow, I can't imagine being that fit, ha ha! Great writing!Laura Morriganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16402692693911867276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-78286285687944497682015-12-06T02:54:55.561-05:002015-12-06T02:54:55.561-05:00pulled together so well - the pen taut as the acro...pulled together so well - the pen taut as the acrobat ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-18224098222988926352015-12-05T14:47:49.890-05:002015-12-05T14:47:49.890-05:00Perfectly descriptive. The ease with which we can ...Perfectly descriptive. The ease with which we can read the lines you've weaved speaks of the perceived simplicity of her action: your poem feels natural, her action seem effortless... neither probably are. <br /><br />The tone of your poem fits this poem so well... <br />Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-49464176182705498082015-12-04T21:08:22.154-05:002015-12-04T21:08:22.154-05:00Yes-- quite amazing --the balance between tautness...Yes-- quite amazing --the balance between tautness and relaxation--great line breaks here. Thanks. k.Outlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-76409803684989705152015-12-04T16:21:39.766-05:002015-12-04T16:21:39.766-05:00Form gives way to fumes in this study of balance a...Form gives way to fumes in this study of balance and illusion.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-2907617158966775342015-12-04T10:47:44.468-05:002015-12-04T10:47:44.468-05:00I really like the last stanza.I really like the last stanza.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-70053228792487211302015-12-04T07:41:17.286-05:002015-12-04T07:41:17.286-05:00You really hit on the tension in this picture betw...You really hit on the tension in this picture between grace and skill and the incongruous moment chosen for self-indulgence. At the time this picture was taken(my birth year) cigarettes were thought to be harmless, but rather unladylike and 'fast' as well-- so it really is a statement of freedom she makes as well as control--you nailed that perfectly, Rommy.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-66604504992517131482015-12-04T07:19:07.044-05:002015-12-04T07:19:07.044-05:00I think you have captured the essence when you hav...I think you have captured the essence when you have acquired that skill... The second stanza is brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-61913543695993750302015-12-04T01:40:32.435-05:002015-12-04T01:40:32.435-05:00It is a fantastic feat to put the body in such str...It is a fantastic feat to put the body in such stress and make it look easy...Great Write!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-86736305503036955302015-12-04T01:09:55.391-05:002015-12-04T01:09:55.391-05:00effortless vice - nice ending. Usually in any kin...effortless vice - nice ending. Usually in any kind of "sport" making it look easy isn't easy :) Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-12988532713446985042015-12-03T20:38:31.178-05:002015-12-03T20:38:31.178-05:00All parts of our body work together, nice anatomy ...All parts of our body work together, nice anatomy review. The older one gets, the harder to hold grip. My vice has no endless effort, it's hard work. <br />BTW, we've moved, our new (new to us) home's garage has a work bench with a vice. <br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-7567017787162148652015-12-03T20:23:38.060-05:002015-12-03T20:23:38.060-05:00"Effortless vice" is a wonderful phrase...."Effortless vice" is a wonderful phrase.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-31571236041145132622015-12-03T16:41:49.588-05:002015-12-03T16:41:49.588-05:00*grin* You aren't the only one who feels that ...*grin* You aren't the only one who feels that wayRommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-14703299347563870842015-12-03T16:39:44.913-05:002015-12-03T16:39:44.913-05:00You came up with a really fun prompt. It was a ple...You came up with a really fun prompt. It was a pleasure to work with it.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-19439746135337380622015-12-03T16:38:28.468-05:002015-12-03T16:38:28.468-05:00Thanks. The photo was a lot of fun to play with.Thanks. The photo was a lot of fun to play with.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-8088740512052206372015-12-03T16:38:09.532-05:002015-12-03T16:38:09.532-05:00It certainly can be! Even if you are in control in...It certainly can be! Even if you are in control in every other aspect of your life.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-53128460608767019372015-12-03T16:37:01.854-05:002015-12-03T16:37:01.854-05:00Thanks!Thanks!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-37876880311198649122015-12-03T16:35:52.437-05:002015-12-03T16:35:52.437-05:00I did a double take when I first saw the picture a...I did a double take when I first saw the picture as well. That's some amazing control she has!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-19651249801523337432015-12-03T14:25:44.604-05:002015-12-03T14:25:44.604-05:00Effortless vice is my favourite kind!Effortless vice is my favourite kind!Debra She Who Seekshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01845703092794695023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-53193822194007176332015-12-03T13:55:30.061-05:002015-12-03T13:55:30.061-05:00This is an extremely cool take on the picture. I ...This is an extremely cool take on the picture. I especially love the first stanza.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-49109901638707060372015-12-03T12:58:27.887-05:002015-12-03T12:58:27.887-05:00This is a cool take on the photo.Excellently done....This is a cool take on the photo.Excellently done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-9692095187319479062015-12-03T12:38:07.886-05:002015-12-03T12:38:07.886-05:00Yielding to vice is so easy it's a default. Gr...Yielding to vice is so easy it's a default. Great poem.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-80162282504550757032015-12-03T12:34:46.141-05:002015-12-03T12:34:46.141-05:00Now there's a concept ~ effortless vice! Love...Now there's a concept ~ effortless vice! Love this.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-38996169228809676242015-12-03T12:26:09.607-05:002015-12-03T12:26:09.607-05:00Effort vice had be going back to pic to see what I...Effort vice had be going back to pic to see what I had missed! That chick is smoking a cigarette! Really enjoyed the second stanza! Great job!Sharon Rawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17737437259420212462noreply@blogger.com