tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post1130167588011053913..comments2024-03-28T20:19:01.074-04:00Comments on Kestril's Rhythms and Groove: UncomfortableRommyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-25656955639898528512018-10-28T07:43:17.160-04:002018-10-28T07:43:17.160-04:00I have a lot of sorrow and anger over what is happ...I have a lot of sorrow and anger over what is happening in my country. I can only hope that this will galvanize people into shaking off their apathy and voting.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-66667782413707369802018-10-28T07:42:09.539-04:002018-10-28T07:42:09.539-04:00I am so glad you did <3I am so glad you did <3 Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-12945502947297067012018-10-28T07:41:56.825-04:002018-10-28T07:41:56.825-04:00I surprised myself a little with how this turned o...I surprised myself a little with how this turned out. Thanks Stacy.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-54490415389316468282018-10-28T07:41:10.996-04:002018-10-28T07:41:10.996-04:00This is definitely one of the goriest things I'...This is definitely one of the goriest things I've written.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-75193298823000852092018-10-28T07:40:36.455-04:002018-10-28T07:40:36.455-04:00Woot! So glad you enjoyed it!Woot! So glad you enjoyed it!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-35987564858084323532018-10-28T07:38:53.132-04:002018-10-28T07:38:53.132-04:00I was very pleased with the pacing too. It was a b...I was very pleased with the pacing too. It was a bit of serendipity as I didn't consciously write it with pacing in mind.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-10154716575085955362018-10-27T19:49:07.967-04:002018-10-27T19:49:07.967-04:00This is brilliant, Rommy! Even though I am not an ...This is brilliant, Rommy! Even though I am not an American, the news out of America, over the past several weeks in particular, has preoccupied me and I feel like I've been in a constant state of simmering anger and dismay. I had such a visceral reaction to reading this piece. And I can imagine it translated visually into a painting or a powerful short film. Little Gothic Horrorshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18315631250163742387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-10435173712523021452018-10-22T11:42:16.638-04:002018-10-22T11:42:16.638-04:00Love. Love. Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-14540335655663290272018-10-21T19:00:21.969-04:002018-10-21T19:00:21.969-04:00This is powerful and heartbreaking! Very well writ...This is powerful and heartbreaking! Very well written Rommy! Big Hugs! Magic Love Crowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14133368208464734546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-2513964398546623102018-10-17T12:27:18.929-04:002018-10-17T12:27:18.929-04:00Wow! This is so visceral! It packs a gory punch in...Wow! This is so visceral! It packs a gory punch indeed. <br />This stanza : <br />She sews flesh to unsightly flesh,<br />restraining her squirming viscera.<br />A tug of the needle and it's done.<br /> ...yes, this made me sit up!<br />Very well penned.Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-7225155117183007102018-10-11T23:15:31.011-04:002018-10-11T23:15:31.011-04:00Yay!
yoo RITE!!
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exquisite,...Yay!<br />yoo RITE!!<br />Gotta lotta<br />exceedingly<br />exquisite,<br />extraordinary<br />exponential<br />extravanganza<br />expunging<br />excessively,<br />exuberantly,<br />exactly!<br />Whew.<br />Wannum?-blessed b9, Catalyst4Christhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13650964620664544661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-60636458431793691532018-10-09T11:23:45.293-04:002018-10-09T11:23:45.293-04:00LOL, we're all good!LOL, we're all good! Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-11438542119590135992018-10-09T00:13:17.356-04:002018-10-09T00:13:17.356-04:00I can stop staring into the eyes of the subject, w...I can stop staring into the eyes of the subject, what a bastard. The only thing that keeps from jumping into this piece and strangling that waste of space is the fact that her newly stitched determination is going to do what needs done. Discomfort is going to be the least of his worries.<br /><br />The pacing for this piece is perfect, it reads like a story. The suspense builds and builds, we see the ripping, the spilling, feel the insult... and the dismissal (of the real problem). Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-6778801169756423942018-10-08T16:28:38.273-04:002018-10-08T16:28:38.273-04:00and me and typos .... again - I meant to say, I di...and me and typos .... again - I meant to say, I didn't mean to suggest, but I think you caught it! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-66667799671965614612018-10-07T18:31:22.854-04:002018-10-07T18:31:22.854-04:00Yes, the news in the US over these last two weeks ...Yes, the news in the US over these last two weeks absolutely inspired this piece.<br />Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-63909224560703243892018-10-07T17:17:13.217-04:002018-10-07T17:17:13.217-04:00This is brilliantly drawn - intense and impactful....This is brilliantly drawn - intense and impactful. There is a stifled horror in this piece that, for me, mirrors events of this last week … that horror, there now … there, in all its ugliness … though voices mingle in it, proclaiming: it will pass, soon. Apparently, it was just making everyone uncomfortable. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-69154284659075363902018-10-07T15:47:23.852-04:002018-10-07T15:47:23.852-04:00Thanks Pat!Thanks Pat!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-34722818624391217282018-10-07T15:47:00.685-04:002018-10-07T15:47:00.685-04:00Thanks AyalaThanks AyalaRommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-88933396405311961782018-10-07T15:46:51.136-04:002018-10-07T15:46:51.136-04:00Thank you. It was wrenching to write, but the even...Thank you. It was wrenching to write, but the events of the past couple of weeks left me fuming to write something.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-37356416817597144592018-10-07T15:45:12.800-04:002018-10-07T15:45:12.800-04:00Yes, this is exactly what I was trying to get acro...Yes, this is exactly what I was trying to get across. I am enraged, and I hope that other women are too, so that we can do something.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-1581123576198079482018-10-07T15:44:15.021-04:002018-10-07T15:44:15.021-04:00Yes, that was my intent exactly. I was glad I was ...Yes, that was my intent exactly. I was glad I was able to convey that.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-10322270457170170192018-10-07T15:43:45.425-04:002018-10-07T15:43:45.425-04:00Thanks Mary. I am glad I was able to portray that ...Thanks Mary. I am glad I was able to portray that darkness. The men in power in America have a lot to answer for.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-16496695131975292352018-10-07T15:41:30.846-04:002018-10-07T15:41:30.846-04:00Thanks Sanaa. This was a huge departure style-wise...Thanks Sanaa. This was a huge departure style-wise for me, but the political events of the last week compelled me to experiment.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-5226981656190758702018-10-07T15:27:19.132-04:002018-10-07T15:27:19.132-04:00Excellent!Excellent!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-84418640350332968352018-10-07T14:34:53.843-04:002018-10-07T14:34:53.843-04:00A powerful write. A powerful write. ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.com