tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post38150490009083363..comments2024-03-28T20:19:01.074-04:00Comments on Kestril's Rhythms and Groove: Maybe, SomedayRommyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11810721515248103148noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-74435730996775564382020-07-13T14:02:11.855-04:002020-07-13T14:02:11.855-04:00Love it! Although you didn't describe the back...Love it! Although you didn't describe the background I can see it through the dialogue of your story. I love how you write to engage the reader's imagination.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-90329776639861323302020-07-12T17:57:00.992-04:002020-07-12T17:57:00.992-04:00So much of the story comes through in the dialogue...So much of the story comes through in the dialogue--I love that!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-2514080591929149932020-07-12T13:21:08.792-04:002020-07-12T13:21:08.792-04:00Happy Sunday Rommy
Much💖loveHappy Sunday Rommy<br /><br />Much💖loveGillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09830061733849775594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-35771178848908134712020-07-12T11:57:59.695-04:002020-07-12T11:57:59.695-04:00great storytelling! you wrote it with great turni...great storytelling! you wrote it with great turning points and such. nice write!Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08954810869812900099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-42059612647996981762020-07-12T09:40:25.113-04:002020-07-12T09:40:25.113-04:00I suppose that if I had to teach a class on how mu...I suppose that if I had to teach a class on how much more preferable exposition is than merely telling, I'd steer the students to THIS particular narrative. Well done!Ron.https://rlavalette.wordpress.com/2020/07/12/ten-ways-to-see-the-windchime/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-16005380229077075782020-07-12T08:43:41.948-04:002020-07-12T08:43:41.948-04:00Stunning. This caught me up and that last idea--co...Stunning. This caught me up and that last idea--compassion on social versus individual scales--brought me up short. And gave me a slight chill.C. Sandlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15616902831506982429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-48416924090544928802020-07-12T01:35:40.366-04:002020-07-12T01:35:40.366-04:00Great piece of writing which held me captivating. ...Great piece of writing which held me captivating. Intriguing question<br />“Did you start to feel compassion for her?” Marjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-43336987452576880492020-07-12T00:34:31.464-04:002020-07-12T00:34:31.464-04:00Compassion as an option - excellent close - love p...Compassion as an option - excellent close - love pieces that want to make you hear more of the story!thotpurgehttps://thotpurge.wordpress.com/2020/07/06/the-tether-of-want/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-31004137765807705072020-07-11T19:55:49.245-04:002020-07-11T19:55:49.245-04:00Seamless writing. One thought flowed into the nex...Seamless writing. One thought flowed into the next.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-69948457872725191012020-07-11T16:07:19.774-04:002020-07-11T16:07:19.774-04:00Ambitious looks good on you! Ambitious looks good on you! Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-9134581542670639402020-07-11T14:24:11.332-04:002020-07-11T14:24:11.332-04:00Oh, well. She is pretty good at making words get ...Oh, well. She is pretty good at making words get around the real feel, isnt she? Excellent write. J Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16418645028718782130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-25135174412743123082020-07-10T18:43:54.790-04:002020-07-10T18:43:54.790-04:00Glad you enjoyed it!Glad you enjoyed it!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-39252456480502998782020-07-10T18:42:16.628-04:002020-07-10T18:42:16.628-04:00It falls more under the fiction umbrellaIt falls more under the fiction umbrellaRommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-21468309918500765602020-07-10T18:41:38.167-04:002020-07-10T18:41:38.167-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-16191691622535595132020-07-10T18:41:16.569-04:002020-07-10T18:41:16.569-04:00Well, yes, that does happen.Well, yes, that does happen.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-80038655933683609302020-07-10T18:40:35.406-04:002020-07-10T18:40:35.406-04:00Thanks!Thanks!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-14274737666946176912020-07-10T18:39:33.514-04:002020-07-10T18:39:33.514-04:00That word limit really forces me to make each word...That word limit really forces me to make each word countRommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-79779033428162610372020-07-10T18:39:09.017-04:002020-07-10T18:39:09.017-04:00Thanks Bev!Thanks Bev!Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-48835177010951062952020-07-10T18:33:48.527-04:002020-07-10T18:33:48.527-04:00Thank you. I was concerned about getting that paci...Thank you. I was concerned about getting that pacing right. This ended up being more ambitious than I had originally pictured it.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-54316116395971175742020-07-10T18:14:03.588-04:002020-07-10T18:14:03.588-04:00Thanks Kim! It's always fun to see what I can ...Thanks Kim! It's always fun to see what I can pull off within the word limit.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-48707954074793457022020-07-10T18:00:48.463-04:002020-07-10T18:00:48.463-04:00Thank you so much! I was glad I was able to pull i...Thank you so much! I was glad I was able to pull it off.Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-41359807670757574542020-07-10T17:56:29.584-04:002020-07-10T17:56:29.584-04:00Sometimes, that's all any of us could do in a ...Sometimes, that's all any of us could do in a similar situationRommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-64462391932855054852020-07-10T17:55:56.513-04:002020-07-10T17:55:56.513-04:00Thanks Rosemary. I definitely was curious to see h...Thanks Rosemary. I definitely was curious to see how that would work out when I started off. It was a neat exercise in the power of negative space in writing. :) Rommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343895193475984183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-19336474951003391422020-07-09T20:29:52.184-04:002020-07-09T20:29:52.184-04:00Aha! Less is more...and yet you complete the tale!...Aha! Less is more...and yet you complete the tale! Enjoyed this!Vivian Zemshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09588008375525403964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3659263493425330078.post-66714732934664751082020-07-09T14:44:51.993-04:002020-07-09T14:44:51.993-04:00Very interesting, it kept my thoughts focused. A ...Very interesting, it kept my thoughts focused. A two different world conversation. Hard of hearing people are also like that. Compassion, I cannot think of a modern public leader with compassion which showed as such. Science fiction, or a real character whom I did not recognize?<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.com