Magpie Tales 250

This post is a response to the prompt given by Magpie Tales






Impertinent!
The questions you ask me.
The ones you make me ask myself,
With your hair caressed by spring skies,
and lips
capable of setting Antarctica aflame.

I have no answers to why it should be so.
Why me? Why this magic?

But to your question,
"How would I like to be kissed?"
Often,
fiercely,
if you please,
impertinently.



LOL, I wasn't sure I was going to participate this week.
I always feel a tad silly writing love poetry
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20 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 17, 2014 at 7:20 AM

    so intense...love this!

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    1. RommyDecember 17, 2014 at 3:59 PM

      Thank you! I'm happy the intensity came across.

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  2. Debra She Who SeeksDecember 17, 2014 at 8:47 AM

    "set Antarctica aflame" -- yowza!

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    1. RommyDecember 17, 2014 at 3:59 PM

      I'm am particularly delighted with myself at that part LOL

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  3. LeoviDecember 17, 2014 at 8:51 AM

    Yes, I love that fiercely !!

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  4. Sharon RawsonDecember 17, 2014 at 10:01 AM

    Oh, yes!

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  5. humbirdDecember 17, 2014 at 10:23 AM

    Ah, the song matches perfectly the spirit of impertinent! :)x

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    1. RommyDecember 17, 2014 at 4:00 PM

      Thanks! I had fun picking out a song for it.

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  6. Maria MaineroDecember 17, 2014 at 3:20 PM

    Good answer!

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  7. Yvonne OsborneDecember 17, 2014 at 6:28 PM

    Oh! Nice one! Yes, often, fiercely, and impertinently.

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    1. RommyDecember 18, 2014 at 7:25 AM

      Thanks! I was really stumped by the picture for a bit, but I'm glad I came up with something enjoyable for folks to read.

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  8. Magaly GuerreroDecember 17, 2014 at 7:04 PM

    This is a poem with spunk. I love it, especially the last five lines. Such fire!

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  9. Preeti S.December 24, 2014 at 9:00 AM

    "But to your question
    How would I like to be kissed?
    Often
    Fiercely
    If you please
    Impertinently" - I am in love with these lines. :)

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    1. RommyDecember 24, 2014 at 9:46 AM

      Thanks! I'm glad they resonated with a lot of folks!

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  10. UnknownDecember 24, 2014 at 5:01 PM

    Wow. Great poem. I love the shot you found to go along with it.

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    1. RommyDecember 30, 2014 at 8:51 AM

      The picture was actually the prompt to write it. There is a blog called Magpie Tales (http://magpietales.blogspot.com/) that puts out a picture prompt every week, encouraging people to create some sort of written work inspired by the picture. The video choice however, was mine. :)

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