Two Micro Poems


I.
How lucky to live 
in a place filled
with expressive trees.


II.
A tart candied blossom
elevating a melting sweetness,
such are my love's kisses.



Song Choice: Itty Bitty Pretty One, covered by the Jackson 5

This post is part of Imaginary Garden's With Real Toads Tuesday Platform.

Also, if you'd like to inspire some more of my micro poetry and follow me on Facebook, feel free to suggest some of your favorite music to help inspire my month of micro poetry. Don't forget to check out Magaly Guerrero's Facebook page too, to suggest some of your favorite quotes.
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26 comments:

  1. Debra She Who SeeksMarch 29, 2016 at 12:30 PM

    I read the phrase "expressive trees" as "expensive trees" -- not once, but twice, before I clued in. The universe must be telling me something. What, I'm not sure.

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    1. RommyMarch 31, 2016 at 5:30 PM

      ROTFL, that's a funny misread! I'm picturing the yuppy part of town with all the fancy landscaping. :D

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  2. Magaly GuerreroMarch 29, 2016 at 1:04 PM

    I'm enjoying the delicate tone of your micro-poetry. And the visual, too.

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    1. RommyMarch 31, 2016 at 5:31 PM

      Thanks! I wasn't so sure about using the mon I designed, but now that I see how well it works, I think I'm ridiculous for not using it sooner.

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  3. Kerry O'ConnorMarch 29, 2016 at 1:11 PM

    Gorgeous, Rommy!

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  4. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 29, 2016 at 2:02 PM

    Very sweet.

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  5. JimMarch 30, 2016 at 1:10 AM

    Hi Rommy, I see you are wanting more of life's niceties. Nice visual too.
    BTW, I needed some of your moos muse music tonight. My mind was set on a riddle I heard earlier.
    ..

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    1. RommyMarch 31, 2016 at 5:40 PM

      LOL, I suppose riddles can get stuck in one's head just as easily as a song.

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  6. Melancholy and MenaceMarch 30, 2016 at 4:43 AM

    I love your micro poetry (and the gorgeous butterfly and feather print, next to your beautiful words).

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    1. RommyMarch 31, 2016 at 5:44 PM

      Thanks! I designed the print myself. It's in the style of a Japanese crest. I'm rather pleased with how well it turned out.

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  7. Laura MorriganMarch 30, 2016 at 5:02 AM

    You are so great at this!

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  8. GinaMarch 30, 2016 at 10:49 AM

    I love both pieces. Combined they bring memories of summer picnics with hubby :D XXX

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    1. RommyMarch 31, 2016 at 5:47 PM

      Ooh! I hadn't seen them as connected before, but that works! Glad they brought back good memories.

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  9. Maude LynnMarch 30, 2016 at 12:43 PM

    I really like these!

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  10. Carrie Van HornMarch 30, 2016 at 4:34 PM

    Both Micro poems are delightful Rommy. :-)

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  11. Magic Love CrowMarch 30, 2016 at 8:54 PM

    Beautiful! Love them both!

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  12. Gillena CoxMarch 31, 2016 at 6:41 PM

    Nice!!! very nice

    much love...

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  13. Susie ClevengerMarch 31, 2016 at 6:49 PM

    Beautiful..So much spoken in so few words

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