Slivers of Red

I found another shard of it. That sliver of red stuck out in a story of plague--a sharp, bright bit that might have cut me again. But I already knew the trick of picking it up without too much pain. I'd gathered plenty of others like it already. Those were in stories too, though some of them were cocooned in songs and needed to be unwrapped first. I know that it won't look the same even if I find every last piece. I've stopped worrying about that now. The point is I'm looking for them, rediscovering the contours and angles of each of these bits of me, and glorying in the way they feel at home in my chest.

My tree grows new leaves
after winter claims old ones.
New fruits will grow too.



Song choice: Kintsugi by Lindsey Stirling

Liner Notes for this Groove: This poem is linked to Poets and Storytellers United






17 comments:

  1. A haiku of hope, love and anticipation. That's why gardeners are rated so highly on the happiness scale.

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    1. I do know a lot of very happy plant-loving folks

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  2. This haibun is lovely, and very evocative.

    Coincidentally, I've just been reading a story about a damaged young woman who finds help to repair herself, which uses kintsugi as a motif.

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  3. There is a lot of feeling and even a sense of mystery in this wonderful haibun - very captivating- Jae

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  4. This a wonderful post and a fitting poem.
    What I learned about the tree shedding leaves have changed my perspective.
    Apparently the leaves stay stuck till they fully utilize their chlorophyll and transfer all the nutrients-and that’s why they lose their color.

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    1. It's really lovely to think about that last big push to get ready for the winter ahead.

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  5. Oh my, what a beautiful description of reassembling a broken heart through the healing power of creativity. This haibun took my breath away, Rommy.

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    1. Thank you so much! Yes, that is exactly what I was going for.

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  6. A tender, healing write that balances ache and hope in a really satisfying way. Excellent write, Rommy 👏

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  7. Wonderfully delivered kintsugi haibun! Salute

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  8. i especially like the hope i. the haiku, coming after all that. -Eric

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    1. A little hope goes a long way. And thank goodness for that.

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  9. this is intriguing, and has me wondering about the make up of you.

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