That second line is the killer. A very strong tanka.
Thanks! I enjoyed the challenge of working with this form.
The sensuality of this piece makes me want to lean closer to my screen and smell the flower. I just know its scent will be glorious... But I'll wait for nightfall. :-)
Sounds like a plan
Such a beautifully sensuous tanka, Rommy!❤️
Beautifully drawn. Selection by nose.
I love it. Wonderfully done.
Glad you enjoyed it
I love the seductive tone of this. Beautiful.
Woot! Glad I was able to get that across.
Well woven delight
Delicious to think of!
Elegant isn't always easy for me to pull off :D
The soft sounds of the words, the m's and r's especially, make this a textural beauty, as well as a poetic one.
Yes! I'm glad the aural components came through.
true night blooms are selective - Love that! Beautiful writing