“That one has the look of ‘he’s done me wrong for the last
time’ on her face,” he said right before popping a glutinous rice ball the same
shade of white as her robes into his mouth. He chewed it slowly. “What do you
think, Fumihiro?”
“I think you had better share the mochi, Eiji,” Fumihiro
said. His red, clawed hand pulled out several of the sweet treats from the bowl
and gobbled them up.
Eiji did nothing to stop his elder brother from taking the
mochi. He was used to it. Eiji wrinkled his snout. “I think there are toenails
in that doll she’s carrying.”
Fumihiro sniffed the air. “Yes, that smells about right. She
must be very close to her target.”
“Of course she is. You have to be close to someone to hate
them this much,” Eiji said, looking at his brother. “And you truly have to hate
someone to risk being out during the hour of the ox to cast a
curse.”
The brothers watched
as the woman balanced on her single pronged sandals and hammered a nail through
the straw doll she brought with her, impaling it onto the sacred tree.
“Nice form,” Eiji said, nodding. “And she’s well prepared.
She not only has the dagger and the mirror, she’s managed to keep the trivet
with lit candles balanced on her head this whole time. There’s something to be
said for doing things properly.”
“I guess,” Fumihiro said. He looked away from the woman and
sucked on the ends of his matted hair, hoping to find any crumbs left from the
mochi there. Finding none, he moved on to investigate his loin cloth for other
traces of food.
Eiji leaned forward, tapping a claw on his red chin. He considered the woman, now screaming her desire to have her faithless lover’s heart devoured by jealousy. “There
is something to be said about bad form though.”
“And what’s that?”
“Itadekimasu,”* Eiji said, flashing his fangs in
the moonlight.
*Itadekimasu = “Let's eat”
This flash fiction piece was created for my prompt over at Poets and Storytellers United's Weekly Scribblings: Myth-placed.
Ushi no Koku Mairi by Matthew Meyer Find more of his marvelous mythology work at Yokai.com |
Liner Notes for this Groove: Oni are a legendary ogre-like creatures in Japanese mythology. The only thing they like better than sweet rice balls (mochi) is human flesh. The cursing ritual described in the story has a basis in Japanese mythology. The ushi no koku mairi is a notorious spell, requiring several components to do correctly. It must be performed between 1 and 3 a.m., called the Hour of the Ox. This is the time when the border between the world of the living and dead is thinnest, and it is also the time when evil spirits have the most power.
Song Choice: I Put a Spell on You by Screaming Jay Hawkins
chilly, as chilly as the straw doll the woman brought along. she must be regretting her trip out in the night.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed this scary tale!
I glad you did :)
DeleteWhat a finely crafted piece of fiction - very immersive
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae!
DeleteI agree with Jae.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed it
DeleteThis is deliciously dark and enticing, Rommy!❤️ The instant I read the opening line I squealed with delight as I knew what "Oni" referred to. Gorgeously rendered!❤️
ReplyDeleteLOL I'm happy you were familiar with the creatures
DeleteWow the Oni sure will eat her up even worse a fate than her jealousy
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Much✏❤✏love
Terrible things have been known to happen during the hour of the ox
DeleteSome (all right, many) do go a long way to properly acknowledge those who make them feel strong emotions.
ReplyDeleteThe exchange between Eiji and Fumihiro made me think of the relationship between Crowley and Aziraphale. I can tell that those two have spend a lot time together, and probably eaten a lot of screams in the same way. But who can blame them? Bad form should never go unchallenged (or, untasted *cough*).
Bon appétit. I mean, one must never forget one's manners.
I'm fairly sure it's not their first Hour of the Ox catching a meal together. :D
DeleteI thoroughly enjoyed your Japanese mythological srory, Romny. It's right up my street.
ReplyDeleteWoot! Glad you enjoyed.
DeleteGreat story telling!
ReplyDeleteThank you, mysterious visitor!
DeleteLove and hate so intricately linked. This was a fantastic read. I had a bit of a giggle as he checked his loin cloth for something else to eat. (I'm always checking for the crumbs that inevitably tumble into my bra. Lol!).
ReplyDeleteLOL, it's the little details that sell a story sometimes. :D
DeleteOh what a marvellous chilling story I enjoyed reading this Like Lori I found it amusing that he looked for crumbs especially at the end of his matted hair lol
ReplyDeleteYeah, even when I try to go creepy, eventually I end up at a little silly. :D
Delete... those two might meet their match some day. But tonight it is her turn. Well told!
ReplyDeleteThanks Margaret
DeleteThis is dark, Rommy. Sometimes we need to see the dark in characters like these to explain the world around us in no sugarcoated terms. I like this but does that me dark as well? Hmmm... ;)
ReplyDeleteLOL, I know that I need to let the darkness out a little in stories from time to time. I'm just glad people still read them. :D
DeleteOne of my exes once cursed a work bully by stabbing a pig's heart repeatedly with knives and then burying the whole thing in a farmer's field at night under a full moon. She seemed to think it was effective.
ReplyDeleteWow, hope you parted from her on good terms, lol.
DeleteLOL, that you are alive to tell the tale is a good sign, but I'd be careful if she ever invites you out on a full moon light 'just to catch up'.
DeleteDeliciously (sic) creepy. I loved that it was also funny and even a bit homely.
ReplyDeleteYaaaaaaaaas. I really wanted to get those elements in there. A tiny format is super-challenging to play in, but it feels so good to pull things off.
DeleteLove this chiller. All the details you wrote into it give it incredible visuals for my imagination to feast on. Remind me to never roam far from home in the hour of the ox.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie!
DeleteI like seeing how the promoters write, sometimes it shows their preconceived thoughts, others have nooo idea. Here I have nooo idea. BTW, I'm not familiar with Eastern mythology. Thanks for the prompt.
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LOL, no worries.
DeleteChilling to the bone! Great tale and description of characters, emerging slowly, making it all the more creepy. Like "The hour of the Ox".
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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