Unmistakable

It’s hard to believe
in the promise of springtime
while walking on the dried remains
of snow crushed grass, 
until
you see that first bit of green, 
thrusting forth an unmistakable digit
at the retreating frost.

Photo by iMattSmart on Unsplash



Liner Notes for this Groove: This poem was created by for the Weekly Scribblings prompt at Poets and Storytellers United, Beautiful Words. I chose the word shitamoe , which means 'plants sprouting under last year’s dried grass or under the snow' as my inspiration. 

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    1. LOL... I am delighted someone got the joke! Who says poets have to be proper all the time? 😂

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    2. I was wondering about that, Rommy, if you did that on purpose. XD

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    3. LOL I'm ashamed to say I missed it. But I appreciate it now! Thanks, Jenna, for drawing attention to it.

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    4. LOL, I may have had an irritating orange frost in mind when I wrote this piece and wanted a way to say goodbye properly.

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  2. Wonderful work, Rommy & fine response to the great prompt. Thanks!

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  3. Unmistakably green, Rommy, and the best promise!

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    1. The frost has nowhere to go but away... far, far away.

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  4. "unmistakable digit" fantastic image
    Happy Wednesday

    Much💖love

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  5. Perfect challenge for a perfectly beautiful day ... and a perfect poem. Do you think I sound over the moon too much ?????

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    1. No more than I am. Also, I think there are onion chopping ghosts about because I'm a tad misty.

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  6. Love that unmistakable digit! Matches one in my garden!

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    1. Yay! I'm waiting for snowdrops to poke their heads out.

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  7. Longing for spring... right now it is hard to believe the promise

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    1. It's hard to be patient when you just want a bit of warmth back again.

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  8. It's amazing what just a bit of green will do for one's spirit after weeks and weeks of snow. Bless all those tiny green things that dare to poke their heads through the snow!

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    1. I feel like I've won a scavenger hunt when I find them on my wintertime walks.

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  9. What a beautiful response to this piece of inspiration!

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  10. I'm with you, spring is near. We can plan on it by February 15, three weeks from now. And with climate changing we really haven't had winter for a few years.
    That's what your Poem did for me. Thanks for writing it and for finding us those "words"
    ..

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    1. The snow situation hasn't been bad around here either--so far. But I wouldn't mind a couple more to deal with if it meant that we were finally taking global warming seriously enough to make changes.

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  11. Beautiful Rommy! I have to admit, I am hoping for a longer winter this year! LOL! Big Hugs!

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  12. I can only say this is very beautiful. That you are bringing forth life in your poetry is special!

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  13. I love spring. Although we don't get hard winters I always look forward to that "unmistakable digit" of spring flowers popping up through winter's death. Beautiful poem

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    1. I remember getting into the habit of looking for them, and later teaching my kids to. It's just my little way to celebrate the turning of the wheel.

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  14. This was wonderful Rommy, full of beauty and hope! And I loved the prompt you posted — well done on both counts... :)

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  15. "unmistakable digit" - gotta love that!
    What a lovely, hopeful poem, Rommy.

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  16. Excellent and love the "unmistakable digit"!
    Hurrah for green!
    Anna :o]

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  17. How lovely is to witness signs of spring after winter's dark!

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    1. It makes winter days just a bit warmer. And whatever cold is left over can be chased away with a good cup of tea. :D

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  18. We don't get much frost here, but I love seeing the first bulbs bloom--such a sense of hope in this

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    1. Mmm, yes. It will be a bit before we see the crocus (still haven't spotted a snowdrop yet) but I am happy to keep my eyes open for them.

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  19. Hopeful of the greening, in more ways than one. The truth and the green push their way to the forefront.

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    1. I am looking forward to all the ways the greening can manifest. Here's to seeing more of the truth come out too.

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  20. I love this so much. And I'm totally laughing at the final visuals. I always knew plants were great at communicating their likes (and loathing) through body language.

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    1. LOL, I figured you'd appreciate that detail

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  21. Ah...that is a long way off for us in the North.

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    1. We still have a ways to go in the Philly suburbs for actual green growth

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  22. what a great metaphor of the frost for 'you know who'. :D
    let the springtime bring forth healing and recovery and hope.

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    1. We still have a long way to go, but yes, I'm glad to see that loathsome frost leave DC. :D

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  23. Apart from some of our mountain ranges Australia doesn't really have winter, but winter sports are possible in our mountainous areas. When our family first emigrated from Britain we swam in the sea in winter not finding the water any colder than on England's south coast!

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    1. My teeth chattered at the thought of it, even if you did say it wasn't that cold. I shall need a good cup of tea to warm up now. :D

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