in the promise of springtime
while walking on the dried remains
of snow crushed grass,
until
you see that first bit of green,
thrusting forth an unmistakable digit
at the retreating frost.
Photo by iMattSmart on Unsplash
Song Choice: Feeling Good by Nina Simone
Liner Notes for this Groove: This poem was created by for the Weekly Scribblings prompt at Poets and Storytellers United, Beautiful Words. I chose the word shitamoe , which means 'plants sprouting under last year’s dried grass or under the snow' as my inspiration.
"an unmistakable digit," eh? LOL
ReplyDeleteLOL... I am delighted someone got the joke! Who says poets have to be proper all the time? 😂
DeleteI was wondering about that, Rommy, if you did that on purpose. XD
DeleteLOL I'm ashamed to say I missed it. But I appreciate it now! Thanks, Jenna, for drawing attention to it.
DeleteLOL, I may have had an irritating orange frost in mind when I wrote this piece and wanted a way to say goodbye properly.
DeleteWonderful work, Rommy & fine response to the great prompt. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ron
DeleteUnmistakably green, Rommy, and the best promise!
ReplyDeleteThe frost has nowhere to go but away... far, far away.
Delete"unmistakable digit" fantastic image
ReplyDeleteHappy Wednesday
Much💖love
Thanks Gillena
DeletePerfect challenge for a perfectly beautiful day ... and a perfect poem. Do you think I sound over the moon too much ?????
ReplyDeleteNo more than I am. Also, I think there are onion chopping ghosts about because I'm a tad misty.
DeleteLOL
DeleteLove that unmistakable digit! Matches one in my garden!
ReplyDeleteYay! I'm waiting for snowdrops to poke their heads out.
DeleteLonging for spring... right now it is hard to believe the promise
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to be patient when you just want a bit of warmth back again.
DeleteIt's amazing what just a bit of green will do for one's spirit after weeks and weeks of snow. Bless all those tiny green things that dare to poke their heads through the snow!
ReplyDeleteI feel like I've won a scavenger hunt when I find them on my wintertime walks.
DeleteWhat a beautiful response to this piece of inspiration!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rosemary
DeleteI'm with you, spring is near. We can plan on it by February 15, three weeks from now. And with climate changing we really haven't had winter for a few years.
ReplyDeleteThat's what your Poem did for me. Thanks for writing it and for finding us those "words"
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The snow situation hasn't been bad around here either--so far. But I wouldn't mind a couple more to deal with if it meant that we were finally taking global warming seriously enough to make changes.
DeleteBeautiful Rommy! I have to admit, I am hoping for a longer winter this year! LOL! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteMy corgi does too! He only had one really good snow romp this year.
DeleteLOL!
DeleteI can only say this is very beautiful. That you are bringing forth life in your poetry is special!
ReplyDeleteThank you, JC
DeleteI love spring. Although we don't get hard winters I always look forward to that "unmistakable digit" of spring flowers popping up through winter's death. Beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteI remember getting into the habit of looking for them, and later teaching my kids to. It's just my little way to celebrate the turning of the wheel.
DeleteThis was wonderful Rommy, full of beauty and hope! And I loved the prompt you posted — well done on both counts... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rob
Delete"unmistakable digit" - gotta love that!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely, hopeful poem, Rommy.
So glad you enjoyed it
DeleteExcellent and love the "unmistakable digit"!
ReplyDeleteHurrah for green!
Anna :o]
I know I'm looking forward to it.
DeleteHow lovely is to witness signs of spring after winter's dark!
ReplyDeleteIt makes winter days just a bit warmer. And whatever cold is left over can be chased away with a good cup of tea. :D
DeleteWe don't get much frost here, but I love seeing the first bulbs bloom--such a sense of hope in this
ReplyDeleteMmm, yes. It will be a bit before we see the crocus (still haven't spotted a snowdrop yet) but I am happy to keep my eyes open for them.
DeleteHopeful of the greening, in more ways than one. The truth and the green push their way to the forefront.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to all the ways the greening can manifest. Here's to seeing more of the truth come out too.
DeleteI love this so much. And I'm totally laughing at the final visuals. I always knew plants were great at communicating their likes (and loathing) through body language.
ReplyDeleteLOL, I figured you'd appreciate that detail
DeleteHappy Sunday
ReplyDeleteMuch💖love
I hope yours was nice too
DeleteAh...that is a long way off for us in the North.
ReplyDeleteWe still have a ways to go in the Philly suburbs for actual green growth
Deletewhat a great metaphor of the frost for 'you know who'. :D
ReplyDeletelet the springtime bring forth healing and recovery and hope.
We still have a long way to go, but yes, I'm glad to see that loathsome frost leave DC. :D
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Laura!
DeleteApart from some of our mountain ranges Australia doesn't really have winter, but winter sports are possible in our mountainous areas. When our family first emigrated from Britain we swam in the sea in winter not finding the water any colder than on England's south coast!
ReplyDeleteMy teeth chattered at the thought of it, even if you did say it wasn't that cold. I shall need a good cup of tea to warm up now. :D
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