for an invitation from the wind
to test how far I could fly.
Song Choice: You Learn by Alanis Morissette
Liner Notes for this Groove: This poem was created for the Friday Writings prompt at Poets and Storytellers United, Upcycled Words. I did go through a bunch of my old poems, intending to reuse a couple of lines here and there. As I tried to see how they might fit together, this bit came to mind and I thought it was pretty decent as is.
It's wonderful as is!
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DeleteVery uplifting, so to speak!
ReplyDeleteLOL, I see what you did there :D
DeleteLove this...
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteNice photo and recycled poem. Happy you dropped by my blog today
ReplyDeleteEaster Blessings
Much💜love
Have a blessed Easter, Gillena
DeleteJust beautiful. So few words but so much to think about as metaphor for life.
ReplyDeleteI am glad I was able to pack that in there
DeleteWhat a titillating little verse. It sets the mind off on imaginary wind drifts!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bev
DeleteSweet and meaningful.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is about "Do we dare to take chances in life"?
ReplyDeleteI am also thinking about one of the haiku i wrote, along similar lines. :)
I wouldn't quibble with that interpretation of it. :)
DeleteNice one !
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSo true. In my case, I always seem to need more thrust. (from Chicken Run scene)
ReplyDeleteLOL, that movie was so much fun!
Deleteperfect thoughts for the moth!
ReplyDeleteI'd say so :)
DeleteYes! Very wise!
ReplyDeleteSometimes I surprise myself :D
DeleteAbsolute perfection ....
ReplyDeleteThanks, Helen!
DeleteAnother thing that holds us back... some of us are so timid. Nice metaphor
ReplyDeleteI know I've struggled with being too timid from time to time.
DeleteDecent and then some. I love how the words we read weave so much power into what is implied.
ReplyDeleteThat's the fun of micropoetry isn't it? If we do it juuuuuuust right, we can pack a lot in there.
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