I need the words to
slide from your lips.
I’ve waited to hear
them shaped by your tongue.
By the flickering light
of one hundred candles,
oh, how I’ve longed for
the release you bring.
All night, you’ve
teased and toyed with me,
speaking the names of
other demons.
I’ve tried not to pout,
knowing my turn is coming.
Instead, I’ve watched
you tremble,
your eyes wide with
fear.
You’re irresistible
when you’re terrified.
I know, with every
story you start,
you want the feel of my
claws on your skin
just as much as I do.
Because as each story
gets told,
as each candle’s light
dies,
you hear my breath
behind you more clearly.
I am close enough to
tangle your hair with my horns.
You know your words
bring me ever closer.
And still you don’t
stop. Closer, and closer I come,
until you finish all
one hundred stories,
and at last, you are
mine.
Ao Andon by Matt Meyer
Song Choice: I Get Off by Halestorm
This poem was inspired by the prompt given at Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads, Creatures of the Night and the work of Yokai expert extraordinaire, Matt Meyer (if you love learning about Japanese creatures that go bump in the night, his website Yokai.com, as well as either of his books is a wonderful resource). I was fortunate enough to attend a Japanese Ghost Story lecture he gave at Shofuso, (the Japanese House at Philadelphia) earlier this evening. So when I got home and saw this prompt, I knew I'd have to write about one of the wonderfully eerie creatures he spoke about.
The ao andon is a creature intimately linked with traditional Japanese ghost story telling parties from the Edo period. The well-to-do would gather in a room with one hundred candle-lit lanterns. For every ghost story told, one candle would get extinguished. Once the last candle was put out, the ao andon would appear, and the gods only knew what terror she had planned for guests bold enough to go that far.
For starters, your poem is amazing. Notes are fascinating. At age 75 I can say I loved "I Get Off On You" ~ is that a good thing?
ReplyDeleteLOL - I'd say it is! I like Halestorm. Joan Jett is more my generation, but like you, I do appreciate a good rock song no matter the year.
DeleteI do love the eeriness of those ghosts less exploited.. the POV of the ghost tingles my mind, like those horns you describe... wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI had a really good time listening to the Japanese ghost stories earlier that evening and was more than happy to share some of my enthusiasm.
DeleteGosh, Rommy this is absolutely chilling and petrifyingly good 💀 I can only wonder the horrors awaiting those who possess courage enough to blow out the last candle. Beautifully executed 💀
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
I imagine she has a very creepy finale planned out.
DeleteSo titillating scary! What a wonderful tribute to a culture you love. The line about being close enough to tangle hair with horns is spine chilling!
ReplyDeleteYou must have had so much fun!
It was such a blast! It was held in my beloved Shofuso at night.
DeleteI read this one with a huge grin on my face and roaring every few lines. I can almost see the face of the speaker, blissful in the knowledge that release will come. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI imagine her grin got bigger and bigger as well, as each candle was put out.
DeleteThis is fascinating, Rommy. It is so cool the way your inspiration came to you.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kerry! I really like learning about Japanese culture.
DeleteWonderfully controlled tale of terror.
ReplyDeleteImaginative craftsmanship
Part of the credit has to go to Shofuso's ghost story event. I'm not sure if they'll hold something like this again next year, but I'm very pleased I had a chance to go.
Deletehis fault for preparing only one hundred stories on a night like that
ReplyDeletemuch love...
LOL, Indeed! He should have been as wise as Scheherazade.
DeleteLoved this. Such a wonderful cadence of telling that heightens blowing each next candle out: a ritual dance with death and desire that consummates when everything goes dark. Amen.
ReplyDeleteIt is a marvelously eerie Japanese tradition
DeleteOh that was really awesome Rommy. The image of one candle at a time...perfect!
ReplyDeleteIt was easy to be inspired by the imagery from the tradition.
DeletePerfect Rommy!!! I really loved your words! Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThis was such a fun piece to work on. I'm glad others like it too.
DeleteHoly fuck, this was magic! I love love love to love you baby loved this!
ReplyDelete*grin* The talk I went to was really wonderful for my muse.
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