To my dark delight I heard the susurrus
escape the restraint of your lips
before they alighted on me,
to reciprocate joy.
My bliss drunk eyes
can see no star to rival you
in the night sky, which bears reverent
witness to the adorations we bestow upon one another.
Of all the jewels found at night,
well after the sun kisses the moon
and the blushing evidence of their desire
turns from flushing scarlet and melts into indigo,
you, my love, shine brightest.
Song Choice: Love Me Like You by Ellie Goulding
This poem was inspired by A Dash of Sunny's Prompt Nights: It's Easy to Love the Light. Show Me Your Darkness and is linked to the Poetry Pantry 347 I was inspired by the sentence "Then to her dark delight there was a susurrus" from the book Wee Free Men by Terry Pratchett (although you should note the topic matter of my poem and the book are extremely different - very, very different) and the poem There Be None of Beauty's Daughters by Lord Byron.
Sadly, this is the last week of Prompt Nights, but Sanaa's wonderful energy will still be going strong over at Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads.
Sadly, this is the last week of Prompt Nights, but Sanaa's wonderful energy will still be going strong over at Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads.
Whistles!!❤️💜This is absolutely stunning Rommy😀I love the fact that your poem was inspired by the book 'Wee Free Men', the beautiful song by Ellie Goulding (its my favourite!) and oh the poem by Lord Byron. A fiery combination I must say! Especially love; "Of all the jewels found at night, well after the sun kisses the moon and the blushing evidence of their desire turns from flushing scarlet and melts into indigo, you, my love, shine brightest." Beautifully executed. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support❤️💜
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Happy to do so Sanaa. Welcome aboard the Toads! :)
DeleteThat is so beautiful! Would that all could find love like that!
ReplyDeleteMmm-hmmm
DeletePerfect choice of song for this delight.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteSuch beautiful images appear from your words Rommy. I loved the way your wrote this delightful poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Robin
DeleteSuch beauty and love.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it
DeleteA poem in love with its subject. And, somehow, the richness of tone, imagery and word choices tell us that the love is mutual, that it feeds two hearts in a circular dance made for two. This is beautiful, Rommy.
ReplyDeleteIt is a dance of give and take, finding joy in both roles.
DeleteHi Rommy! What a beautiful love affair between dark and the speaker! You've managed to tantalize senses and seduce the reader into falling in love too. A very delightful write!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad I was able to convey the sensory delights well
DeleteOh, how utterly luscious and gorgeous! (And the song choice the perfect accompaniment.)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteMy bliss drunk eyes
ReplyDeletecan see no star to rival you
Such an endearing affirmation of the connection between lovers.
During certain moments the ecstasy of love only allows room for lover and beloved in the world
Delete'Of all the jewels found at night,'...such a love-full starry line...gorgeous..
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it
DeleteI really love how you painted light from a dark perspective... isn't that what we are looking for... if all was bright were would we seek delight?
ReplyDeleteVery true
DeleteAh, this poem has the feeling of NEW love. What bliss.
ReplyDeletePerhaps new, perhaps not. But certainly, in that moment, very heady.
DeleteBliss drunk eyes ... we have to watch out for them. Sometimes they can be "your lyin' eyes" ! A beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteLOL, good point
DeleteSo wonderful, a love like this. Gorgeous writing, kiddo.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry!
DeleteSounds like love :)
ReplyDeleteZQ
I'd say so
DeleteBeautiful images!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it
DeleteThis is a beautiful poem. So filled with perfect images of love and the receiving of joy,,,:-)
ReplyDeleteYep...exactly :)
DeleteDelightfully divine...I especially love the blushing evidence :-)
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it
Delete"you, my love, shine brightest. "
ReplyDeleteThis is so romantic and I luv the song choice
much love...
Thanks
DeleteOoooooooowwwwww......glorious shudders as memories are awakened. You put a real smile on my face today :) XXX
ReplyDelete*grin* Mischief managed!
DeleteSuch beautiful lines...loved it...especially the third stanza....!
ReplyDeleteYay! Glad you enjoyed it
DeleteThis was a lovely dance. So sorry I missed it the first go around. Glad I found it, though.
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