It took three days for Ai to realize
she was a prisoner not a guest. She spent the first day on the shelf trying to
shake off the despondency of leaving her friends behind in the attic. What she
wouldn’t give to hear Yoshi-kun describe how he lit up a spring festival again. Even
Matsu-san’s stuffy war stories would have been welcome, though they always
happened during a storm. But what else could one expect from a general’s
umbrella?
The second was spent trying to hear
any traces of grace in the insensate notes played by children on other instruments.
Even the accomplished geisha Hatsuko was a novice once,
Ai told herself as she observed them from behind her glass case.
A month later, she could bear it no
longer. No one noticed her. No one would ever play her again. Ai swooned. Her
neck clicked against her cell.
“What’s this?” Mrs. Tanaka said
turning towards the back wall of the music studio.
“Would you believe it?” Trina said.
She motioned towards the old shamisen. “I found it with other junk in a
client’s attic. They said I could keep it. I thought it looked pretty good
there.”
“Hmm,” Mrs. Tanaka said, touching
the case. “No bachi. Still lovely though. May I take her out?”
“Sure,” Trina replied. “Even if you
break it, it didn’t cost me a dime.”
Mrs. Tanaka reached in. She heard
the soft sigh with the first pluck of the string. “How much do you want for
her?”
Trina regretted saying she got it
for free. She probably could have asked for more. Still, it was money she
didn’t have before. She laughed as they shook hands. “You know, sometimes I
think this thing is a bit of a diva. It’s always falling over.”
You don’t know the half of it, Mrs.
Tanaka thought, cradling the shami-shōrō.
Ai smiled.
Shamichouro-Kotofurunushi-Biwabokuboku illustration by Matt Meyer
curator of one of the most informative and beautiful sites devoted to yokai lore, yokai.com
as well as author of two amazing books, The Night Parade of One Hundred Demons: a field guide to Japanese Yokai
and The Hour of Meeting Evil Spirits: an Encyclopedia of Mononoke and Magic.
Liner Notes for this Groove:
A shamisen is a traditional Japanese stringed instrument. A bachi is a flat, ice scraper shaped object used to play a shamisen. It's a little like a guitar pick in function. A shami-shōrō is a shamisen once owned by a virtuoso player that has attained sentience.
This short fiction was composed as a response for Magaly Guerrero’s prompt Telling Tales with Magaly Guerrero:A Pantry of Prose over at Poets United. The poem it was based on was Lament of a Shami-Shoro.
A shamisen is a traditional Japanese stringed instrument. A bachi is a flat, ice scraper shaped object used to play a shamisen. It's a little like a guitar pick in function. A shami-shōrō is a shamisen once owned by a virtuoso player that has attained sentience.
This short fiction was composed as a response for Magaly Guerrero’s prompt Telling Tales with Magaly Guerrero:A Pantry of Prose over at Poets United. The poem it was based on was Lament of a Shami-Shoro.
Song Choice: Let Me Dance for You from A
Chorus Line
To enjoy the story I had to have a clear idea of what a Shami chōrō is. Nice that Mrs Tanaka won. love the use of 'cradle' here. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLOL, I was so happy to fit in the time to write a story I forgot to add an explanation of term. I added that in now. Thanks Sumana.
DeleteThis is wonderful story of personification... there is nothing more sad than an instrument imprisoned and stuck away. To be freed and plucked is a great thing for any instrument.
ReplyDeleteIndeed. She was literally made for music.
DeleteA wonderful tale, in both verse and prose. Quite fascinating.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary
DeleteI really enjoyed the subtlety , how the shami choro became valuable once someone else wanted it. I am sure Mrs. Tanka will treasure her and will provide her with the happy and useful environment that she will thrive and grow in! A fun tale!
ReplyDeleteIt will certainly be a happier life than being used as a knickknack
DeleteIf I were Ai, I would go all diva, too, in self-defense. To be kept from the sort of life that feeds one soul is too close to death for anyone's liking.
ReplyDeleteI really love that we get to glimpse at the world from the point of view of the instruments and of people. A real treat. And a yummy example of my favorite sort of anime fiction.
I quite agree. Being demoted to a random shelf decoration when all she needed was someone who knew how to play her (and knew that the missing pick/ bachi was an easy thing to replace) probably drove her mad. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteLove your use of personification for Ai. I often look at musical instruments used as decoration and wonder if they regret losing their voices. I’m glad she found someone who understood her need to sing.
ReplyDeleteI think all anyone really needs is someone who understands their need so sing, whether we are a sentient musical instrument or not. :)
DeleteI LOVE this story so much, love her realizing she was a prisoner, not a guest, her head falling over in despair at never being played again, and her smile as she was carried away in more knowing hands. Superb!
ReplyDeleteIt took me really thinking about the character to come up with that first line. I'm glad I was able to express her heart within the word count limitations. That's always tricky for me!
DeleteI love a happy ending!
ReplyDeleteMe too! The original poem didn't have a happy ending but I thought Ai deserved one. :)
DeleteWhat a lovely, magical tale! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sharon. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteI enjoyed your write!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Annell!
DeleteI love how your gave this musical instrument life...and freedom.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vivian :)
DeleteWow! I loved loved loved this!
ReplyDeleteYay! So glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteOh this is lovely!❤️ I loved the personification you used for Ai. I wonder if musical instruments can hear our thoughts when we play them and appreciate the music that they make!❤️
ReplyDeleteI'd like to think so. :)
DeleteWow, wow, wow! I LOVE this. Instruments are alive! And this one, with name an thoughts and day to day count . . . I love that she is rescued by someone who could here her,. having just read the novel "Sing, Unburied, Sing" I'm singing for magic realism.
ReplyDeleteOoh! That sounds like something I ought to check out.
DeleteWhat a cool direction you went in with this piece - a real creative idea wonderfully developed. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Wendy!
DeleteThe personification and beautiful view point is absolutely wonderful Rommy! I love this so enchanting and sweet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Carrie!
DeleteA beautiful, enchanting tale! I love that you brought the instruments to life in this way.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it
DeleteOh, the fact you personified the instrument struck me right in my stringed heart. My girls play stringed instruments and when they leave them sitting in their cases, untouched. I so feel the loss of music. Love the story!
ReplyDeleteAw! I hope you get to hear their music again.
DeleteReally enjoyed this! Glad she found someone to play her.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked it
DeleteA delightful tale of the unused and neglected becoming treasured once again!
ReplyDeleteThanks MMT!
DeleteI love this tale Rommy! I love the happy ending too.
ReplyDeleteRommy, are you Japanese? Or have it in your heritage? I've always wanted to ask you that. My mom has quite a few Japanese friends, and I love going over to their houses for tea and sushi! I love learning about different cultures!
Big Hugs!
As far as I can tell, nope. Ancestry.com has also ruled that out. But there are a lot of Japanese in Peru, the country both my parents are from (I was born in the USA)
DeleteVery interesting! Thanks.
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