Moon by Alphonse Mucha |
You call me inconsistent
when my patterns are obvious
to those who bother to observe.
There is nothing irregular
in my nighttime roving.
My feet quicken and slow
with my waxing and waning.
For this you dismiss me
and say my nature keeps me from understanding
what you have deemed important.
Perhaps you are right.
I have no wish to understand
a mind so closed.
Why would I be interested
in your idea of acceptable
with the stars' kisses
still fresh on my skin?
This poem is linked to Imaginary Gardens with Real Toads: Take A Chance and Step into the Mythical World. It is also linked to Poets United's Poetry Pantry 498.
People are not taught to be really virtuous, but to behave properly.
Liner Notes For This Groove: Sometimes peoples' ignorance enrages me and sometimes it makes me laugh. I had overheard part of a conversation where one older gent declared to younger one that women were destined to be unable to understand higher levels of virtue because of their gender.
I've been trying to keep a promise I made to myself to stay out of fruitless arguments. And the expression on his conversational partner's face told me that there was a good chance that choice morsel of dung was not going to go unaddressed. I let it be. Attitudes like that are going the way of the dinosaur (good riddance). I see the younger generations gleefully challenging old ideas. I chose to focus on the hope I feel when I hear young people speaking up rather than despair about the remaining pockets of fossilized ignorance, at least on that day.
So dear Groovers, what lights up your nights with hope? Let's talk about it down in the comments section. As always, drop a link to your cyberhome if you'd like to continue the chat there.
Song Choice: Bad Reputation by Joan Jett and the Blackhearts
I would always choose the stars - I love how this drifts along with the knowledge of who you are
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DeleteYour poem reminds me of tarot cards, The Moon and The Star.
ReplyDeleteThat's cool as I do love me some tarot cards
DeleteLove the final two lines of your poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteLike Kerry, your poem made me think of tarot cards, their patterns, and the moon and stars. I love that it is from the moon’s perspective, and especially enjoyed the lines:
ReplyDelete‘Why would I be interested
in your idea of acceptable
with the stars' kisses
still fresh on my skin?’
Thanks Kim. I liked giving the moon maiden a voice.
DeleteWOW!!❤️ You had me at the opening lines, Rommy! There is a delicious blend of mystery and allure in your words and I love the image; "with the stars' kisses still fresh on my skin?" People are so quick to judge aren't they? If a person is just a tad bit different from the rest he or she is subjected to criticism and scorn. If only the world could appreciate everything that is unique. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt!😍😍
ReplyDeleteIf only! But I won't hold my breath that it will happen any time soon.
DeleteThe Moon Maiden, should be admired in all of her stages. I really liked the first stanza as to those that don't take the time to get to know her will see her as inconsistent but those that persevere see the pattern to her grace. It feels so much like a gentle dance. Perhaps a lullaby to the stars that give her kisses.
ReplyDeleteOh I really like that idea!
DeleteLove everything about this poem. The title, image and your words all come together and deliver a beautiful and gentle verse. If the speaker is enraged by some people's ignorance it certainly doesn't show. Very well executed!
ReplyDeleteAs for what lights up my nights with hope? The moon, stars and a Lighted Tip Pen always do the trick. :-)
A lighted tip pen is exceedingly handy, especially at meetings.
DeleteHow right you are for we all have an escape mechanism (especially poets) that let us escape from the mundane and enjoy living in our imagination.
ReplyDeleteA little escape now and again doesn't hurt anyone.
DeleteOh dear moon maiden you are way beyond the cursed narrow mind. How beautifully you addressed social ignorance with moon goddess wisdom.
ReplyDeleteI loved exploring how she rises above it all
DeleteI think sometimes the moon prefers to turn her back to us, but when we stare back at her in the round glory of her fullness, I cannot understand anyone capable of ignoring her.
ReplyDeleteNeither could I
DeleteWell said! I have no time whatsoever for ignorance. I think such people are just sad or at the very least, living in denial. I love your poem-Refreshing!
ReplyDeleteI am way too busy to deal with that for any extended length of time. :D
DeleteIt is impossible to see into a closed mind, so the Moon Maiden knows best. Love this Rommy!!
ReplyDeleteIndeed she does
DeleteAnd sometimes the Moon Maiden goes dark. But when she shines, she is so very bright.
ReplyDeleteWe can't forget the darkness or the light
DeleteI love the speaker's attitude. She is wise. Some attitudes aren't worth a bloated moonbeam's fart. Best ignored. The alternative might involved loose teeth and bruised knuckles. And bruised knuckles are not the best look.
ReplyDeleteI find hope in the fact that these days I get to interact with so many people who aren't stupid. A few years ago, that was just a dream...
Yeah, I find bruised knuckles don't go with a lot of my favorite outfits.
DeleteHo. That man has not evolved beyond the 1950's. Sigh. And there are a whole bunch of them running the country now.
ReplyDeleteSadly true. Hopefully the next few election cycles should flush a few of them out.
DeleteGreat
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteGreat to learn the lesson of staying out of fruitless arguments!
ReplyDeleteIndeed
Delete'With the stars kisses still fresh on my skin'-sigh... This is one gorgeous line, and of course the rest are marvelous as well Rommy.
ReplyDeleteI really liked it too
DeleteWhen I first read your poem I thought "sleepwalking", because I know someone who does and another who doesn't believe it. Then I read your explanation and my mind's switch flipped. I so agree. Thankfully the world is changing for a better understanding and acceptance, but seems just not fast enough.
ReplyDeleteI do like hearing about other interpretations though! Thanks for sharing. :)
DeleteI tend to think the moon’s perspective would be the correct one.
ReplyDeleteI agree
DeleteYour beautiful, soulful poem makes me imagine the moon being autistic; while her interior world is clear to her, she can’t make others understand it.
ReplyDeleteThat's an intriguing interpretation
DeleteThese lines lash and laugh at the same time. I'm going to go with hope being a constant surprise...that song or performance or poem or butterfly or deer by the roadside that pulls you far enough out of the day-to-day that you re-engage that child-brain, the one that's amazed without irony.
ReplyDeleteOh I like that idea of hope!
DeleteA wonderful poem – and all the more so for knowing the background. How astounding that such a view is still being uttered by anyone in this day and age! Who wouldn't choose the stars' kisses? Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteMakes me feel a little sorry for him--but more sorry for the women in his life
DeleteI love the image and I love your words!
ReplyDeleteWhat lights up my nights with hope? Love! Those people with closed minds, I walk away from now, but in doing so, I hope they see my light and love and maybe start to see their light and love! Big Hugs!
Love does cast a powerful light
DeleteWonderful! I have no appetite for fruitless arguments and prefer to give my attention to lifting up what and whom I believe in. I love the taste of rebellion in your poem, even though there is no true rebellion. The speaker is just being true to who she is. That last stanza is breathtaking!
ReplyDeleteYes! That was part of what I was going for
DeleteGreat poem! And I love the closing 2 lines. They are eloquent and wise … and really kinda classy, I think. Rising above the ignoramuses of this world that invade our spaces - is a good direction to go with them … that and then: a quick exit ~ smiles ~ As always, I enjoyed your Linear Notes.
ReplyDeleteA very quick exit, and hopefully better company afterwards
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