down to my every bone.
Deep in every cell
I carry the imprint
of some dancing mother
ready to embrace me
in the twine of forgotten DNA.
My magic within hums
in tune to the magic around me.
My bones remember the beat
even when my mouth stumbles over the words.
This magic and I are one.
There is no wall
saying, “Here it begins”
and “There it stops.”
But you want to quantify it, own it
while at the same time looking down on it.
Imagine that…
Consider that magic flees from disdain
and force. Stop and understand
that eyes that have decided on definitions
before they are even opened are as good as blind.
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This poem is linked to Imaginary Gardens with Real Toads: Just One Word - Imagine and Poets United's Pantry of Poetry and Prose #9.
Song Choice: Así Soy (Spanish cover of This is Me from the Greatest Showman) by Calle 42
The magic is magical, Rommy! It is good to imagine where the strength came from, the DNA is revealing!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank
DeleteI love "I carry the imprint of some dancing mother." What a cool thing to have in one's DNA.
ReplyDeleteOh absolutely
DeleteLove how you used DNA in your poem ... a unique approach to the challenge and it works!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen
DeleteMy daughter is an artist and I have a great great Aunt who was an artist as well. It was spine tingling to see how alike their artist's brush strokes are - and similar styles... My daughter had never seen the art before. Yes, the "dancing mother" line is very cool.
ReplyDeleteIt's cool to see the things that get passed down in families
DeletePowerful conclusion. Long live magic!
ReplyDeleteHere, here!
Deletemagic flees from disdain
ReplyDeleteThis is why so many people miss out on the magic in this world.
100% co-signed!
DeleteOh gosh I love the voice, the attitude here, Rommy. You tell em! It is those who have different expectations and disdain who are missing out.
ReplyDeleteI feel sorry for them...almost ;)
DeleteSolstice blessings to you and yours, Rommy!
ReplyDeleteThanks Debra, to you as well :)
DeleteOh, those last 2 lines say it all. Salute!
ReplyDeleteThey do make a nice conclusion
DeleteBrilliant last stanza, Rommy!
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteI'm with Sarah. May I please marry that last stanza? I promise to be good to it, to adore the truth it tales, to remind it every day just how perfect it is.
ReplyDeleteSeriously, those who live in a tiny box with no windows, can rarely see beyond their walls.
LOL, a sad way to live if you ask me.
DeleteSdaly so many have made up their minds before they understand anything as they have such fixed impressions, for we are surrounded by blind minds.
ReplyDeleteThere does seem to be an epidemic of it
DeleteAh those judgemental eyes, yes they are blind eyes
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday
Much🎅love
Sadly so
DeleteAh, yes, magic must be welcomed, or it will surely flee. It will have nothing to do with disdain and force.
ReplyDeleteYup
DeleteI wish I had written this. I experience this so often--I have experienced this for so long! Thank you for this poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words Susan
DeleteThis is gorgeously written, Rommy!! I so love and resonate with the closing lines; " Stop and understand that eyes that have decided on definitions before they are even opened are as good as blind." Yes!!🔥❤️
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it
DeleteI would give up on disdain and go for the magic... that's why poetry rules
ReplyDeleteI mean, it really seems like the only sensible thing to do
DeleteBravo, Rommy! A powerful gut-punch of uplifting, life-affirming realness! I too love the line: "I carry the imprint of some dancing mother ready to embrace me in the twine of forgotten DNA." When read through the lens of someone without a loving mother in this life, it is a powerful belief to cultivate that there is a "forgotten" spiritual DNA linking one to a mother energy beyond. And thank you for the music video. For anyone who hasn't watched it, go take a look and then read Rommy's poem again. Fantastic! Así Soy! Aquí estamos!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words and insightful comments!
DeleteI really liked reading this. Right away it reminded me of the slight young Russian dance teacher I had on the QEII. She followed my every move as if I was really leading me. And so light to move her, as if she were reading my mind.
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The best dancers often seem like that.
DeleteVery interesting!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Cool
DeleteLOVE this line: eyes that have decided on definitions
ReplyDeletebefore they are even opened are as good as blind.
Thanks Colleen
Deleteimprint of some dancing mother- love that!
ReplyDeleteI was tickled by the mental images it brought up
DeleteYour last line reminds me of the adage: There's none so blind as those who will not see..
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rommy, for giving me something to think about.
Then I've done my job as a poet. Thanks!
DeleteThis poem is not only powerful but it is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ayala
DeleteMy magic within hums
ReplyDeletein tune to the magic around me.
My bones remember the beat
even when my mouth stumbles over the words.
LOVE!!!!
I'm glad you do <3
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