I remember when I first saw her.
I composed the hymn in my heart right away.
I can’t remember the other things
on display at the museum that day.
I only had eyes for that large dark flower
taking up most of the space in the composition.
I don’t recall the exact words I wrote later
but it was my first prayer of praise
for a goddess who taught me
how very beautiful
and worthy of admiration
darkness can be.
Liner Notes for This Groove: In high school we had a trip to the Met in NYC, which is where I first saw Black Hollyhock and Blue Larkspur by Georgia O'Keeffe. I bought a print and wrote my first 'for fun' (as opposed to 'for homework') poem when I got home. I remember that I wrote it in the form of a prayer (I think I was inspired St. Francis's Canticle of the Sun) and that I liked it well enough to submit to my high school's literary magazine. And they accepted it! I think it was the first time it crossed my mind that I might enjoy this writing business.
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A most stunning poem in accompaniment to the artwork by George O'Keeffe, Rommy!💝 Hollyhocks are symbolic of the cycle of life, which bodes well with the eternal battle between light and darkness. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt!😘😘
ReplyDeleteI did not know that about them! Thanks :)
DeleteThe artwork inspired a poem and the memory of it another. It seems very cyclical indeed. I'm familiar with the work of Georgia O'Keeffe but this is the first time I'm seeing this piece. I too am stunned at the gloriousness of darkness.
ReplyDeleteIsn't it gorgeous? It was something seeing it in a museum.
DeleteI love that you went for a black hollyhock and I chose black tulips, Rommy! I enjoyed your anecdote about the school trip and being inspired by Georgia O’Keefe’s painting and the way you recalled the experience in your hymn-poem. Yes, darkness is worthy of admiration.
ReplyDeleteLOL, goth flowers can be very intriguing.
DeleteI think this poem's near perfect; also I'm crazy about Georgia O'Keefe's flower paintings, so this was altogether a treat.
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks Rosemary. :)
DeleteI love how her artwork inspired the young poet in you!
ReplyDeleteIt's funny the things that strike a chord in us.
DeleteThere is more to darkness--and to dark flowers--than meets the eye.
ReplyDeleteIndeed
DeleteThanks for a lovely poem and the note helped in the appreciation
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much love...
May your Wednesday be lovely as well Gillena
DeleteDon't know which I like more; Georgia's painting(s) or your poem about this one.
ReplyDeleteAw! Thanks Ron
DeleteSo glad you now enjoy this 'writing business'. Now I can read your lovely poems, like the one above. It's nice to get a living example of how art can inspire art.
ReplyDeleteIt's kind of wonderful to think how art doesn't just move people but it sows seeds of future creativity in the people it touches too.
DeleteI so love this..We need to appreciate the beauty in darkness. Thank you for reminding me.
ReplyDeleteYou are most welcome
DeleteO'Keefe's work inspires one. I hadn't seen this one either, and find it absolutely breathtaking.
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely isn't it? That print went with me to college too.
DeleteOh, Rommy how I love this memory, the inspiration, the awe And wonder in the tone. A flower that makes a soul embrace the beauty the blooms in the dark. That’s what I call living (and lived) art.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad I was able to convey the awe I felt all those years ago.
DeleteThis is what I like about this community: I see and learn something new. I haven't seen this painting before and it ties so well with your early poem. Congratulations on your early success as well.
ReplyDeleteThanks Joel!
DeleteDarkness is a valid choice. That painting is a favorite of mine. Love her work.
ReplyDeleteIt's quite beautiful.
Delete...and you have come a long way since then with wonderful writing. Always keeps me til the end word.
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks JC!
DeleteI find it a very positive poem, yes darkness can be beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Vandana
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ReplyDeleteMuch💝love
Thanks Gillena
DeleteInteresting to see beginning inspirations--the overwhelming impact of the image vibrates in this poem.
ReplyDeleteI know I had been to museums before, but that was the first time I experienced being in awe at a painting.
DeleteI do love the conclusion so very much, and the backstory about how you found the piece of art so inspiring as young is as fascinating.
ReplyDeleteThe kind of art that I remembered mostly where of much more dramatic kind... I visited the Louvre when I was ten years old and I still remember how "The Raft of Medusa" affected me.
Oh I'll bet that made an impression! And the Luvre! I would love to visit there some day.
DeleteI've never seen a black flower but if anyone could paint one it'd be Georgia O'Keefe. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI actually managed to grow black hollyhocks one year. They were glorious! But buy were they hard to start from seed. :D
DeleteIf we do not celebrate darkness, how can we embrace the light?
ReplyDeleteIndeed
DeleteI love this prayer of praise … what a glorious inspirational concept. And the backstory was enchanting. What a wonderful share!
ReplyDeleteI really need to dig around my parents' house and see if I can't find the original too. I think it'd be neat to show my kids.
DeleteWhat is so good about this is how inspirational others inventiveness can inspire us too. There are so many great female artists that are inspirational because they show a different way of viewing their subjects.
ReplyDeleteYes, exactly! You never know in the creating of art who will be moved and in what way. But it's an amazing thing to witness.
DeleteThere's something about black flowers, I think... and the sentiment in the poem is bang on! A certain reverence...yes!
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely! LOL, it makes me wish I had more of a green thumb.
DeleteOMG, I love this so much, Rommy. How very beautfiul! "I composed the hymn in my heart right away"...I find this breath-taking. If anything worthy of praise...nature, art, light, darkness...the mysteries within us awaiting discovery. Wonderfully written. :-)
ReplyDeleteI didn't realize how deeply that visit touched me then. But there were so many things that moved inside me, little shifts, that happened that undoubtedly brought me here. Mysteries waiting to be discovered indeed. :)
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