Black Hollyhock


I remember when I first saw her.
I composed the hymn in my heart right away.

I can’t remember the other things
on display at the museum that day.

I only had eyes for that large dark flower
taking up most of the space in the composition.

I don’t recall the exact words I wrote later
but it was my first prayer of praise

for a goddess who taught me
how very beautiful 
and worthy of admiration
darkness can be.




Liner Notes for This Groove: In high school we had a trip to the Met in NYC, which is where I first saw Black Hollyhock and Blue Larkspur by Georgia O'Keeffe. I bought a print and wrote my first 'for fun' (as opposed to 'for homework') poem when I got home. I remember that I wrote it in the form of a prayer (I think I was inspired St. Francis's Canticle of the Sun) and that I liked it well enough to submit to my high school's literary magazine. And they accepted it! I think it was the first time it crossed my mind that I might enjoy this writing business.

Song Choice: Who Says by Selena Gomez & The Scene

50 comments:

  1. A most stunning poem in accompaniment to the artwork by George O'Keeffe, Rommy!💝 Hollyhocks are symbolic of the cycle of life, which bodes well with the eternal battle between light and darkness. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt!😘😘

    ReplyDelete
  2. The artwork inspired a poem and the memory of it another. It seems very cyclical indeed. I'm familiar with the work of Georgia O'Keeffe but this is the first time I'm seeing this piece. I too am stunned at the gloriousness of darkness.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Isn't it gorgeous? It was something seeing it in a museum.

      Delete
  3. I love that you went for a black hollyhock and I chose black tulips, Rommy! I enjoyed your anecdote about the school trip and being inspired by Georgia O’Keefe’s painting and the way you recalled the experience in your hymn-poem. Yes, darkness is worthy of admiration.

    ReplyDelete
  4. I think this poem's near perfect; also I'm crazy about Georgia O'Keefe's flower paintings, so this was altogether a treat.

    ReplyDelete
  5. I love how her artwork inspired the young poet in you!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It's funny the things that strike a chord in us.

      Delete
  6. There is more to darkness--and to dark flowers--than meets the eye.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Thanks for a lovely poem and the note helped in the appreciation
    Happy Wednesday

    (✿◠‿◠)

    much love...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. May your Wednesday be lovely as well Gillena

      Delete
  8. Don't know which I like more; Georgia's painting(s) or your poem about this one.

    ReplyDelete
  9. So glad you now enjoy this 'writing business'. Now I can read your lovely poems, like the one above. It's nice to get a living example of how art can inspire art.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It's kind of wonderful to think how art doesn't just move people but it sows seeds of future creativity in the people it touches too.

      Delete
  10. I so love this..We need to appreciate the beauty in darkness. Thank you for reminding me.

    ReplyDelete
  11. O'Keefe's work inspires one. I hadn't seen this one either, and find it absolutely breathtaking.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It's lovely isn't it? That print went with me to college too.

      Delete
  12. Oh, Rommy how I love this memory, the inspiration, the awe And wonder in the tone. A flower that makes a soul embrace the beauty the blooms in the dark. That’s what I call living (and lived) art.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I'm glad I was able to convey the awe I felt all those years ago.

      Delete
  13. This is what I like about this community: I see and learn something new. I haven't seen this painting before and it ties so well with your early poem. Congratulations on your early success as well.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Darkness is a valid choice. That painting is a favorite of mine. Love her work.

    ReplyDelete
  15. ...and you have come a long way since then with wonderful writing. Always keeps me til the end word.

    ReplyDelete
  16. I find it a very positive poem, yes darkness can be beautiful!

    ReplyDelete
  17. Interesting to see beginning inspirations--the overwhelming impact of the image vibrates in this poem.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I know I had been to museums before, but that was the first time I experienced being in awe at a painting.

      Delete
  18. I do love the conclusion so very much, and the backstory about how you found the piece of art so inspiring as young is as fascinating.

    The kind of art that I remembered mostly where of much more dramatic kind... I visited the Louvre when I was ten years old and I still remember how "The Raft of Medusa" affected me.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Oh I'll bet that made an impression! And the Luvre! I would love to visit there some day.

      Delete
  19. I've never seen a black flower but if anyone could paint one it'd be Georgia O'Keefe. Beautiful!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I actually managed to grow black hollyhocks one year. They were glorious! But buy were they hard to start from seed. :D

      Delete
  20. If we do not celebrate darkness, how can we embrace the light?

    ReplyDelete
  21. I love this prayer of praise … what a glorious inspirational concept. And the backstory was enchanting. What a wonderful share!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I really need to dig around my parents' house and see if I can't find the original too. I think it'd be neat to show my kids.

      Delete
  22. What is so good about this is how inspirational others inventiveness can inspire us too. There are so many great female artists that are inspirational because they show a different way of viewing their subjects.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes, exactly! You never know in the creating of art who will be moved and in what way. But it's an amazing thing to witness.

      Delete
  23. There's something about black flowers, I think... and the sentiment in the poem is bang on! A certain reverence...yes!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Absolutely! LOL, it makes me wish I had more of a green thumb.

      Delete
  24. OMG, I love this so much, Rommy. How very beautfiul! "I composed the hymn in my heart right away"...I find this breath-taking. If anything worthy of praise...nature, art, light, darkness...the mysteries within us awaiting discovery. Wonderfully written. :-)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I didn't realize how deeply that visit touched me then. But there were so many things that moved inside me, little shifts, that happened that undoubtedly brought me here. Mysteries waiting to be discovered indeed. :)

      Delete