Was it you
that kissed me
in the darkest part of the night?
Was it the warmth
of your breath
that announced that intention,
with a soft sigh that lingered
long enough for my lips to part
and receive you?
Let me explain a few things.
I have been taught to question my instincts—
no—even more than that—
I’ve been made to question
simple things, like shapes and colors,
obvious to the youngest school child.
I mistrust joy
that just lands in my lap,
demanding nothing
but my acknowledgement.
And you, you,
are no simple joy.
Will it be you
there, when I open my eyes
after the dark, dark has passed,
waiting, with another kiss ready for me?
I really do hope so.
Photo by Ryan Young on Unsplash |
This poem was created for the prompt given over at Poets and Storytellers United, Weekly Scribblings #32, I Am Explaining A Few Things
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Rommy!😍 Especially love; "Was it the warmth of your breath that announced that intention, with a soft sigh that lingered long enough for my lips to part and receive you?" Thank you so much for writing to the prompt! 💝💝
ReplyDeleteThank you for creating it!
DeleteI hope this for you too. HAPPY WEDNESDAY
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much love...
Hope you have a lovely day too
DeleteThis is really beautiful Rommy. Love is precious and missed so much when it flies away.
ReplyDeleteWe should all be thankful for the wonderful moments of connection in our lives.
DeleteFor me, these words hit hard .... 'and you, you, are no simple joy' This is a lovely poem full of meaning.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Helen
DeleteMysterious!
ReplyDelete*dons a mask and flutters a fan in front of her face*
Deleteso difficult, that we are all conditioned to question what we see. The emperor indeed has no clothes ~
ReplyDeleteHere is the US I'm rather grateful when the leaders keep their clothes on.
DeleteI just came from sighing romantically over Sanaaa's piece, to do the same all over again at yours. Very beautifully said!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary
DeleteTrust and embrace joy. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it
DeleteMay it be so...Beautiful writing
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie
DeleteBeautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jenna
DeleteOh yes. It will be there. The joy that landed need not be questioned. Accept it. Embrace it. Let it envelop you. Obviously, it was meant for you alone.
ReplyDeleteEnveloping joy sounds like a lovely thing to curl up with in the evenings.
DeleteTo get through this life, it is better to accept simple joy without question.
ReplyDeleteit's OK for some things just to Be
DeleteI mistrust joy that just lands in my lap - that resonates... sadly...!
ReplyDeleteYeah, I think it's hard to take joy at face value in today's world
DeleteDon't know how I failed to comment here earlier. Great work; I esp liked "you, you /are no simple joy."
ReplyDeleteLOL, glad you came back to do so :)
DeleteReally enjoyed this, the way you work in the uncertainty and the way safety and mistrust are bound into beginnings.
ReplyDeleteYes, I absolutely was going for those feelings!
DeleteI am grinning. No, I am not grinning because I grin all the time. But because there a passionate honesty in this poem, which engages the heart (and grinning muscles). I love the balance between strength and vulnerability. The speaker shows her heart, tells the subject that it can be broken, but the tone speaks of the fact that she is also cautious. I love the reality of this love.
ReplyDeleteIt does take a certain kind of strength to admit to being vulnerable, and of course trust must be involved.
DeleteHappy Sunday Rommy
ReplyDeleteMuch💝love
Have a terrific day Gillena
DeleteAwww. That is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteBeautifully passionate. "You are no simple joy" captures the mind.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that line was so arresting
DeleteWell expressed. Those vulnerabilities are sweetly human.
ReplyDeleteVery much so
DeleteA beautiful poem that reveals both strength and vulnerability of the speaker. Great write, Rommy.
ReplyDelete...and it's good to hear you are working on a bigger project. Happy Writing!
DeleteYaaassssss! I am really having fun getting down to work on a meaty project again. I'm sorting out some of the hiccups in getting a fixed writing, but so far, I've managed to advance things a little bit each day. :)
DeleteThis is so familiar. Nothing that lasts is simple or easy. From the darkest part of night to the break of day. The longing, the want of another.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful.
I'm glad you enjoyed it
DeleteI like "you are no simple joy."
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