Find a good home for my teas.
Make sure they will be gladly drunkby people who will think of me
fondly, warming their hands
around a full mug.
I’ve had love, so much love,
pouring freely through
the dark corners of the labyrinths,
and wearing smooth
the odd-shaped cracks
that made up the mad tea party
I called my life.
I’d like to think some of that
love will come through
between the sips of tea
(maybe a few moments of laughter too)
long past the time
the warmth from it fades.
the odd-shaped cracks
that made up the mad tea party
I called my life.
I’d like to think some of that
love will come through
between the sips of tea
(maybe a few moments of laughter too)
long past the time
the warmth from it fades.
Photo by Loverna Journey on Unsplash
Song Choice: Earth Song by Harry Bellafonte. I've told the children this is one of the songs I absolutely want played at any sort of funeral they hold for me.
This poem was created for the prompt given at Poets and Storytellers United, Weekly Scribblings #37: Last Messages.
Oh, that's beautiful! (And great song, too.)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Debra
DeleteThis is so you, Rommy! I love it! I adore the lines:
ReplyDelete‘…wearing smooth
the odd-shaped cracks
that made up the mad tea party
I called my life.’
LOL, tea and I are fairly inseparable at this point
DeleteNice work, Rommy. Every sip should remind us. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ron
DeleteInteresting prompt. Lovely poem
ReplyDeleteThe prompt certainly gave me quite a bit to think about!
DeleteI believe those moments of laughter will be brewed into every cup of memory having to be with you. Even while crying, there will be Rommy-myrth. It's just natural--too many souls loved, and will continue to love, the mad party that is you.
ReplyDeleteI certainly hope so. LOL, and I hope my children will honor my wish to have Groucho glasses passed out as memorial favors so that a field of Grouchos will bear witness as part of my ashes get planted with a tree.
DeleteI’d like to think some of that
ReplyDeletelove will come through
between the sips of tea.............precious like a tea!
Indeed!
DeleteA mad tea party nice image, who or which of us have gotten to today without out a bit of fantasy
ReplyDeleteHappy Wednesday
Much💛love
Certainly not I
DeleteThe feel, message, preciousness of your poem is simply wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen
DeleteYou've captured your "wild tea party" life well and tenderly, and I'm sure you'll be fondly remembered and linger long in the memories of those who come after.
ReplyDeleteI do hope stories of my weirdness get told fondly
DeleteSave it, Rom, its a beautiful epitaph, self written by a poetry writer.
ReplyDelete..
Thanks Jim
DeleteI saw this awhile ago while traveling the internet highway and thought of you. Saved it for you. Perhaps you have already seen it, but that's ok. Yours is lovely poetry.
ReplyDelete“If you are cold, tea will warm you;
if you are too heated, it will cool you;
If you are depressed, it will cheer you;
If you are excited, it will calm you.”
~
William Ewart Gladstone
Aw! Thank you so much for thinking of me <3
DeleteThis is so beautiful Rommy. I agree with Jim, save it. I love the idea of your loved ones reminiscing about a life well lived. And laughter in between sips is just precious.
ReplyDeleteIt came out better than I thought it would. Yeah, I like it!
DeleteThis is lovely. <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Jenna
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem this is. It is not hard to recall all the wonder, the beauty and love in ones life and to understand it's sadness too.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad that came through
DeleteThis resonates. I associate many foods with people, present and past.
ReplyDeleteAs do I :)
DeleteGreetings Rommy, This si lovely... I really enjoyed the way you've used drinking tea and all associated with it as a metaphor for love... And you make it work so well here.. Great idea! Wish I'd thought of it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Scottie
Deleteenjoyed this tea poem! in good company too. :)
ReplyDeleteYaaaaas! Thanks
DeleteThere really is something soothing about tea and the memories of cups past.
ReplyDeleteI have lots of fond memories of time spent with friends having a lovely cup of tea
DeleteThis is lovely & the warmth breathes through it.
ReplyDeleteThanks C
DeleteI love this and, as a tea lover, I relate. I like the idea of thinking of my life as a Mad Tea Party and all my belongings being tea for others to use when I'm gone.
ReplyDeleteI hope that a bit of that madness comes in handy for those that enjoy it
Delete"I’ve had love, so much love,
ReplyDeletepouring freely through
the dark corners of the labyrinths," - those dark hidden corners
Am I wrong to like Earl Grey (hot)?
Not at all! LOL, that's my mom's favorite. Love the STtNG reference too. :D
DeleteLovely, those moments between the sips of tea are the most happy and wonderful moments specially when enjoyed with your companion or a friend.
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