A civilized veneer
makes poor armor.
Those who rely upon it
soon become thralls.
(Song Inspiration: Voodoo in My Blood by Massive Attack and the Young Fathers)
The scent of his latest culinary exploit
is only half as tempting as he.
I'm sure breakfast will taste
just as good cold.
(Song Inspiration: Hey Good Lookin' by Hank Williams)
Our fingers trace sigils onto each other’s’
skin –
the culmination of the quixotic magic
that brought us to this moment.
(Song Inspiration: Angels by The XX)
Am I afraid? Yes.
Don’t laugh. I like my order.
And what disrupts an ordered life
more than
love?
(Song Inspiration: Hounds of Love by Kate Bush)
She grasps at phantoms
comprised of
society’s expectations
and wonders why she weeps.
(Song Inspiration: Ripples by Genesis)
I love this idea... what an excellent way to present poem... and I have to say I love the thought of a cold breakfast...
ReplyDeleteA cold breakfast has a certain appeal.
DeletePowerful little pieces, indeed. I adore pithiness, and you've got it.
ReplyDeleteThis was a challenge because I really had to develop that aspect of my writing.
DeleteLoved them all, esp the last one.
ReplyDeleteThe song was really great for inspiring that one.
DeleteAnd I adore these little snippets oh so much :D especially "Our fingers trace sigils onto each other’s’ skin.." and "She grasps at phantoms
ReplyDeletecomprised of society’s expectations.." Its been so awesome writing for your prompts :D
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks Sanaa! Glad you were able to play along as well.
DeleteThese are so fun...what a great idea. I'll offer a suggestion but it's probably well before your time: Moody Blues, Nights in White Satin. Let me know if you go with it.
ReplyDeleteActually - I did! Earlier this month. I just hadn't posted it.
DeleteMoonlight lies, sometimes.
Fearing you are an illusion
I reach out
and touch warm skin.
I want to dance a life in the music of your first Wicked Little Groove. There is so much truth brewing through those four lines! ♥
ReplyDeleteI remember being (happily) surprised by the strength of those words when I was done.
DeleteI love that you were inside by an old Hank Williams song!
ReplyDeleteIt was a suggestion from a fellow blogger. A cool perk of this project was getting to revisit or discover interesting and diverse music.
Delete"what disrupts an ordered life
ReplyDeletemore than love"
So true.
I've always found that to be so. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteThese are all little gems...concise and creatively displayed. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I drew the little Japanese style crest that appears on each piece too.
DeleteYou drew the Japanese crest?? Wow!!! Beautiful!
DeleteYep, that was me :)
DeleteLove them! Especially the last one! I really like the paper, too!
ReplyDeleteI drew that image years ago, but it seemed kind of perfect as a way to stamp my poetry.
DeleteA feast of small insights.
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
DeleteI came over from Debra's blog.
ReplyDeleteHopefully, that breakfast did really taste good cold. Some do.
Happy Writing :-)
LOL, that particular micropoem you mentioned was inspired by Debra's request for some Hank Williams. Thank you so much for stopping by. :)
DeleteI wonder why I weep all of the time. Love the way you presented this!
ReplyDeleteThanks! It was an experiment, but I think I'm doing decently with this format.
DeleteLove them all Rommy! The paper you displayed them on is gorgeous too! (Got to love Hank Williams! LOL!)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I worked with the design I came up with a little bit ago and I think it makes a nice little logo for me. :)
DeleteThese are terrific! Such a creative idea!
ReplyDeleteThanks PattiKen!
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