Maybe it’s the rumble of empty stomachs
that makes it hard to understand what
was said.
Maybe it’s the ache of backs that have
worked too hard
with too little to show for it
making it difficult to comprehend.
It’s a toxic brew –
shame, from knowing it isn’t enough,
fear, of loosing what little there is,
distrust, of the dimly understood other.
It can cause a nasty ache,
and make a person beg
the nearest traveling salesman
for the tonic to make it all go away.
No one minds a drop of snake oil
when the numbness finally starts.
The ache that was a warning
that something more deep and dreadful
is eating you from the inside is stilled.
The price for miracle? Your eyes.
You might start to hurt again
if you saw the ache in others.
Let the nice man with the oil have them.
He might eat them.
He might stuff them up his nose.
He might wear them in his hair.
Who cares?
You aren’t in pain.
Isn’t that all that matters?
Song Choice: Do the Evolution by Pearl Jam
This poem was prompted by Magaly Guerrero's Poetry for the Cruelest Month: Idiots Herding the Blind
No one minds a drop of snake oil
ReplyDeletewhen the numbness finally starts.
Powerful images here..!
Beautifully penned.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks Sanaa :)
DeleteOh love this! Espevially the bit about the eyes!
ReplyDeleteThanks. I liked the combination of absurdity and horror of it.
DeleteWow, Rommy! The poem is very accomplished. Love the way you give pain a face and a body with feelings going through struggles. Makes for a strong connection and an understanding.
ReplyDeleteThanks Khaya! It was definitely a challenge to get the complexity of feelings in there, but I'm glad it works.
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ReplyDeletewhen the numbness finally starts.
The ache that was a warning
that something more deep and dreadful
is eating you from the inside is stilled."
This gets to me, Rommy. I don't know what the feeling is that it's conjured, but it's set something to swirling 'round inside.
No one minds a drop of...
DeleteActually, I kind of like that it evokes something uncertain. That feels like a win :)
DeletePain--of the mind or the body--makes people do terrible thing, especially when said mind hasn't received proper training on how to endure, on how to find hope were none seems to be aplenty...
ReplyDeleteYou have given words to Shelle's word. Those eyes speak terrible truth, fear that eats at the flesh, desperation... and now we know why.
Wow.
While I don't believe all of the world's cruelties are born in pain, I think a whole hell of a lot of them are. And when one is in pain it's easy to buy whatever the first idiot who comes along is selling.
DeletePain, of many kinds, can make you blind and willing to do or say anything to make it go away. We all have our own brand of snake oil. Perceptive and very thought provoking, Rommy! Most excellent!
ReplyDeleteIt is amazing to think what some people will trade to make that pain go. Amazing and dispiriting.
Deletevery profound poem; pain; a definite no no for us all i'm sure; pain the surest road to loosing it
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thanks!
DeleteOh my, this is confronting stuff, so powerfully written.
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to take it all in some days.
DeleteOh Rommy, thank you for letting her speak, yes she needed to numb the pain... you added a dimension, her soul, gave us a miserable life to touch & help us feel... all because your words created one... I love this xox
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm so pleased you like it.
DeleteOooh... This gave me an ache in my insides that won't go away too soon. We hear this said in anger so much now, but to hear it with such sadness...
ReplyDeleteThanks Esther. I remember setting out to write something a bit more angry but once I got going, all that came out was sorrow.
DeleteVery powerful words, with Shelle's art! You gave words to Shelle's art! I love the words you used!
ReplyDeleteThanks, I'm glad everything gelled together the way I had hoped.
Delete"Fear of losing what little there is..." can cover so many facets in a life. Wonderful words yet again. Tis afterall the little things that make that life :D XXX
ReplyDeleteFear can make some people do crazy things.
DeleteVery cool! I love the drop of snake oil. And another great face of Shelle's to go along with it!
ReplyDeleteI saw it and thought it was just a perfect match.
DeleteSadly, the snake oil wears off, but the damage doesn't. You are generous to see that the pain is the issue, however. I wish we would try a better remedy.
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