The moon had moved as far as the second highest branch of the oak tree. Melli sighed as she ruffled Gorgon’s fur.
“Soon, baby,” she cooed at the beast.
“Not soon enough,” fretted Gladys as she stirred the
cauldron. “I want to know now if any make it through. Last year we didn’t have
any.”
Cara set several bundles of herbs on the table. “None’s fine
by me. I’d rather be sure they’re suitable than let just anyone in.” Several of
the other women in the room nodded.
Melli laughed. “I can’t decide which ones are worse, those
who faint at the first twig they step on or the ones who try to snuggle a bear?”
“That only happened once,” said Gladys. “Gorgon and I were
able to whisk her off before anything bad happened. It didn’t take much effort working the charm of
forgetting on her.”
“It’s always easy on the daft ones,” Cara said. The room
exploded in cackles.
Melli agreed with both Cara and Gladys. It was always a
happy day when they welcomed a new witch to their ranks, but she didn’t know
what was in the minds of some of the applicants. The forgetfulness charm meant
some had tried more than once, but if they weren’t just the right sort of bold
mixed with a generous dollop of sense, they would never be happy living this
life.
“Still, I think we’ll have at least two new ones to welcome,”
Gladys said.
This time Cara smiled. “The two chatterboxes? Yes. I heard
them discussing how they might deal with some of the things they might
encounter. They sounded sensible at least. I’ve never seen two that decided to
team up before.”
The moon was just touching that top branch now. “It’s time
to check on them,” Melli said.
The ladies grabbed their brooms or shapeshifted depending on
their preference. The local dryads hadn’t raised an alarm, so no candidate was
in danger of anything greater than embarrassment. Melli did hope those two
girls did make it through. They were spirited enough not to shiver in the dark
and sharp enough to know it’d be helpful to go together. Those seemed like promising
signs to her.
Song Choice: Which Witch by Florence and the Machine
This flash fiction was inspired by the Weekly Scribblings prompt at Poets and Storytellers United, Waiting.
Ooh! Now I want the novel!
ReplyDeleteLOL, I thought it felt like the beginning of something
DeleteOh dear, generous dollops of sense are very scarce in the world, VERY scarce!
ReplyDeleteSuper scarce :D
DeleteOoooh this is a tease...
ReplyDeleteI do kind of want to poke this and see if there's a novel in there. After I'm done with tinkering on the Yuuki novel that is.
DeleteI love this piece, Rommy, and the way the witches spend their time while waiting to start the trials. At least the waiting wasn’t a trial for them as they seem comfortable in each other’s company. The images conjured are amusing, especially: “I can’t decide which ones are worse, those who faint at the first twig they step on or the ones who try to snuggle a bear?” Witch Trials would make a great TV show.
ReplyDeleteLOL, Reality TV sort of inspired part of it, in that you always see some contestants where it's perfectly clear to everyone (but themselves) that they hadn't fully thought some things through.
DeleteCool tale. I wonder what the overall acceptance rate is...
ReplyDeleteRather low I imagine. But people keep trying.
DeleteRomney, this is 'to be continued?' I hope so. My demented mind was made to think about those poor katydids who follow the son spot cycle and must live underground four fourteen years waiting for cycle to begin again.
ReplyDelete..
I hadn't intended it to be larger when I started, but there is something about it that makes me want to play around in that world some more.
DeleteWell, there's a full-fledged mystery to be investigated here! Skillful write.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bev!
DeleteI've always been taken by a sensible witch. The other kind is too much trouble for everyone, and not the good kind of trouble.
ReplyDeleteI love how in these short words I can already see a world. The characters' voices and quirks are distinct, and that's hard to do in flash fiction--especially with this number of characters.
The bear-hugger made me cackle.
Oh, and if you don't give us more and just leave us hanging, I might have to strangle you.
DeleteI was pretty proud of getting a whole cast in under 369 words. But, yeah, I think this could be the start of something bigger.
Deletehoping there is more on the bone you've stirred into this cauldron, Rommy ~
ReplyDeleteThere just might be...
DeleteInteresting tale
ReplyDeleteHappy Wednesday
Much💚love
Thanks Gillena
Delete"grabbed their brooms or shapeshifted depending on their preference" ~ I love this line and shapeshifted is one of my favorite words ... I love using it whenever I can. Enjoying this tale.
ReplyDeleteLOL, I love that word too
DeleteIt is always good when a short story makes you yearn for more and escape from our own doubtful world. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteIt's a bit of an escape writing it too!
DeleteI love this, Rommy. More, please!
ReplyDeleteThis does feel like it could be part of something bigger, though I didn't plan it that way.
DeleteWitches and brooms and a cauldron Great ingredients for a stew of entertainment Loved it WOuld love to see what happens next
ReplyDeleteI am delighted that people seem to like this bit!
DeleteHappy Sunday Rommy
ReplyDeleteMuch💚love
Thanks
Deletereading this initiation story is fun. seems like the start of a new adventure. :)
ReplyDeleteLOL, now I really think I should get an outline prepped from this -- after I finish the novel I'm working on right now.
DeleteA witch with a dollop of sense would be a powerful thing. Love the mystery emanating from the story.
ReplyDeleteIt would indeed! I am so glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteObviously, everyone wants MORE, PLEASE. Me, too.
ReplyDeleteLOL, OK, I'll mark this one down as having some promise for bigger things. :)
DeleteNovel please!!! Truly a beginning to something! Big Hugs!
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