Eclipse Warning

My anger is a fast-moving planet.
But when it eclipses fear,
whole worlds can be re-ordered.

Photo by Jongsun Lee on Unsplash


Liner Notes for this Groove: This poem is linked to Poets and Storyteller United's Friday Writings Post.
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10 comments:

  1. Debra She Who SeeksSeptember 14, 2023 at 9:36 PM

    World shaking!

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  2. Magaly GuerreroSeptember 14, 2023 at 10:47 PM

    Anger and fear are powerful forces separate. Together they can be cataclysmic. I agree with Debra, "World shaking!"

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  3. JimSeptember 15, 2023 at 12:53 AM

    I never thought of hiding ones fear by being angry. Guess when I drive really wild and scare the bejesus out of the Mrs. she hollers bad at me instead of cowering.
    ..

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  4. MarjaSeptember 15, 2023 at 1:20 AM

    Love how anger eclipses fear and worlds are changing Great

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  5. Penelope NotesSeptember 15, 2023 at 8:53 AM

    This is a powerful analogy. When unabated anger eclipses the fear, things can get dangerous. Cower or get angry … two different reactions to fear.

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  6. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSeptember 15, 2023 at 9:50 PM

    Righteous anger can indeed be stronger than fear

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  7. Debi SwimSeptember 16, 2023 at 12:49 PM

    I agree with Rosemary. Powerful

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  8. MargaretSeptember 17, 2023 at 8:09 PM

    !! So true in everything. Horses are fear based animals and when it is also an anger problem - means unridable. Usually it means their death as they are dangerous

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  9. jossinaSeptember 18, 2023 at 12:08 AM

    Better uses of emotions, and how cleverly the human mind hides one behind the other .. so cleverly written

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  10. Sunra RainzSeptember 21, 2023 at 4:24 PM

    A powerful poem encapsulated in three lines! This is exactly when anger is a positive force.

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