Ukiyo-e blue is my inspiration.
Lost in cerulean perfection,
a sky filled by
dreams
and caresses
from impish winds,
implied
but not seen.
At
least by most.
Ukiyo-e red is my inspiration.
My soul engulfed by its fire.
Scarlet hues
dare me
to be consumed completely
in a
passion of my choosing.
If I am brave enough to say yes.
I do not exist without them.
Life, a sad monochrome
without the impudent tints
animating me.
animating me.
More than lines and colors on paper.
South Wind, Clear Sky (Red Fuji) by Katsushika Hokusai
Song choice: Love Letter to Japan by the Bird and Bee
This poem was created from a prompt offered by Magaly Guerrero for NaPoWriMo (Day 30: Poetry Gone Wild - any topic!)
And with that, I am done with NaPoWriMo! Whew! Thank you to all the brave souls who kept reading!
This poem was created from a prompt offered by Magaly Guerrero for NaPoWriMo (Day 30: Poetry Gone Wild - any topic!)
And with that, I am done with NaPoWriMo! Whew! Thank you to all the brave souls who kept reading!
This is gorgeous! You have painted a glorious vision~ I love your ending!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm pleased with it as an ending both for this poem and for this month of poetry. :)
DeleteYou can feel the colors by your description, great piece!
ReplyDeleteThat's very high praise indeed! Thank you :)
DeleteAnd on the final day I still learn something new...Always loved this art style and never knew what it was called. Beautiful closing poem :D XXX
ReplyDeleteThank you. It was my pleasure to share a bit of knowledge and my words.
DeleteMy favorite stanza is the one that starts: " I do not exist without them". I really like "impudent tints". Perfect. :-) This is a really lovely write.
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting all your beautiful poems for 30 days and also for leading me to this land of free expression filled with interesting people. In my regular life, there aren't many writers, poets, or artists. Thanks for inviting me to the party.
:-)
Thank you for sharing your words as well. It's been a wonderful trip!
DeleteI like ukiyo-e and Hokusai too -- great notes to end on! Congrats on making it through the Challenge! I enjoyed reading all your poems.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I wasn't sure I'd make it some days! LOL
DeleteThis life has landed you upon an unfamiliar shore for by your words you show that your eyes are kissed by cherry blossoms, your heart hears drums from other festivals, and your Soul is most at home in a ceremony of tea. I love the writing you do when you show your passion for this culture. I have so enjoyed getting these looks into your talented mind! Thank you!
ReplyDelete*grin* Thank you so much for your kind words
DeleteAdmire and enjoyed each visit to read deeply provoking prose! And excellent music as well! Acceso rises with unique Art! Take your bowe ......applause, applause
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Aw shucks! Thank you so much for taking the time to read them :)
DeleteThanks for the introduction to Ukiyo-e--the floating world--I loved reading about it almost as much as reading your poem, which has a lovely flow, in waves of color and symbol. This makes my sixth April of doing the 30 poems thing, and I can honestly say, this year has been the best--I have had more fun, and enjoyed it more, because of the people I've met along the way, like you. Thanks for your kind words and support, and now---BREAKTIME!!!! ;_)
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for your kind words and insightful feedback! The other half of the fun was reading and learning from more seasoned poets. :)
ReplyDeleteI read it once... Then I read it again, closing my eyes after each line... Each line is a chant and makes want to sway; you've contained strong whispers of the wind in your poem, and the colors are a feast. I love that in the last stanza, your speaker shows herself soul-naked... The define her, and she accepts that.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad I was able to convey all that with my words :)
DeleteA pleasure to revisit this one, Rommy-- even better on a second read."I do not exist without them." Very alive way to put it. (Well, literally so, I guess. ;_) ) Great to see you at the Garden too.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I've been lurking around and reading the great stuff out that way. I hope to participate more often :)
DeleteSuch a delightful read :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteThis is a particularly stirring descriptive poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you. The print really fired something up in me.
Delete"They are muse." So wonderful!
ReplyDelete*grin* Thanks!
DeleteThanks for stopping by Rommy :D
ReplyDeletexoxo
Thank you for writing!
DeleteI like the cool and hot of it, coming together like a peak.
ReplyDeleteI was going for that sort of feel!
Deletethe image you share and the image you create are filled with energetic color. great combination.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad the energetic feel came through
DeleteWonders of colors.. To often we are caught between the black and white. Great use of Japanese terms.
ReplyDeleteI am rather fond of Japanese culture. As a student of Urasenke Philadelphia (Philly's tea school based out of Kyoto Japan) I get a lot of exposure to some very nifty stuff.
DeleteHi Rommy ~~ I can barely imagine a world without colors. For some that is it. Even dogs can't see colored. Your picture find was nice too. I've only been to Tokyo, and then only sat in the airport for about four hours.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations too on the NaPoWriMo completion. This was my first year but I finished. I pretty well stayed with Toad Garden prompts, maybe all, I cannot remember.
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It was a challenge! But I'm glad I did it. Congrats to you too for completing it!
DeleteLife without colour is a life without heart !
ReplyDeleteAnd who would want a life without heart? *grin* I certainly would not! Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteAbsolutely gorgeous writing Rommy :D I can feel the vibrant array of colors bouncing joyfully in your words. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support.
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks! :)
Delete"Lost in cerulean perfection
ReplyDeletered...My soul engulfed by its fire."
Your poem is breath-taking in its descriptions.
I'm glad you liked it :)
DeleteLOVE! Impish winds and engulfing flames driving out monochromatic melancholy :D XXX
ReplyDeleteThough its an older one, it's one of my favorites. :)
DeleteBeing brave enough to say yes - that is the key to allowing us to love life in colour..and the hardest answer at times - a stunning piece full of colour and yeses
ReplyDeleteThe intensity of the colors used in this painting were so bold, I felt they were owed a bold and brave response.
DeleteBeautiful and I loved your expression "Impudent tints".
ReplyDeleteSometimes I come up with some good phrases. :D
DeleteLovely piece, descriptive and engaging. And the artwork is charming. Congrats on finishing your NaPoWriMo challenge. :-)
ReplyDeleteWhew! Congrats to you too. You put out some pretty inspiring stuff.
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