Daydreams (where I feel blades
of grass, taste each grain
of sugar as it melts, blaze
from the heat of sparks
bursting from constellations
made from all the aspirations
and imaginings too big
for small worlds)
and nocturnes (with the hungry lilt
of an unfinished love song
I can't help but sing along to,
that makes goosebumps dance
with delight, as a cool rush of air
kisses my skin and teases
with the hint of places
not yet discovered) –
these twine around my atoms
like jasmine on a trellis,
releasing its bewitching fragrance
on hot summer nights,
if you care to stay up
and witness it.
Song Choice: Pocket Full of Sunshine by Natasha Bedingfield and As the World Falls Down by David Bowie
This poem was inspired by the prompt given at Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads: I Am Made Of where Magaly asks us to contemplate what we are made of.
One word. WOW!❤️ There is such passion and fire in your lines here, Rommy! Especially love; "and nocturnes (with the hungry lilt of an unfinished love song I can't help but sing along to, that makes goosebumps dance with delight." Beautifully rendered!❤️
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DeleteFantastic, Rommy.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Sherry
DeleteThe scent of jasmine set its magic to this wonder
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks!
DeleteLuv how your yin and yang portions mix and mesh and release into bewitching fragrance. Your last stanza I particularly Luv.
ReplyDeleteThe song choices also resonate the mix
Much love...
What a lovely way to put it Gillena
DeleteI'm in total love with the line breaks and the tone of this poem, with the way it does what it says, by how it is made of parts than dance wonderfully by themselves and become pure glory when seen together.
ReplyDeletePure Rommy.
I had a lot of fun playing with the breaks for this one
Deletelike jasmine on a trellis,
ReplyDeletereleasing its bewitching fragrance
on hot summer nights
The fragrance can be so menacing but only if one cares to be there to witness it.Many may miss the fun though!
Hank
Their loss :D
DeleteWhat an intoxicating dance
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae!
DeleteGiven the chance I would love to stay up and watch. What a bewitching poem this is Rommy.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it
DeleteI agree - such a sparkly and engaging piece, with real strength Rommy - love the way you've used jasmine too... Wish I'd thought of that! With Best Wishes Scott
ReplyDeleteJasmine is one of my favorite flowers. It's a shame I can't grow it too well.
DeleteHave a nice Sunday Rommy
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
Hope yours is nice too!
DeleteSpectacular, delightful and soothing. Wonderful traits indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala
DeleteWhat a delightful read! Loved the jasmine on a trellis releasing its fragrance.
ReplyDeleteMe too <3
DeleteBeautiful, Rommy. I love the approach you took in laying out the descriptions.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kerry. I'm glad I took some time to play with the line breaks.
DeleteGreat! Count me in!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Coolness!
DeleteI love how anchored in nature this is – particularly the jasmine, an old favourite of mine which doesn't grow where I live now (but I remember sight and scent vividly).
ReplyDeleteI wanted a natural link wed to a bit of other-worldliness. Glad it worked. :)
DeleteSo very full, a shopping list, of extentions of fulfillable taste life experiences into those most would not even imagine. My favorite is the places not yet discovered.
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This was a fun piece to create. Thanks for stopping by.
Deleteimaginings too big
ReplyDeletefor small worlds...
hungry lilt
of an unfinished love song... love those lines!
Glad you enjoyed it
Deleteloved your way of putting those thoughts together....this is fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja
DeleteThis is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it <3
Deletelovely and evocative ~
ReplyDeleteThanks Grapeling
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Laura
DeleteI've stood beneath trellis's loaded with jasmine and such here in the south... and been transfixed.
ReplyDeleteIt is such a heady scent. You can easily get lost in it.
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