The mood of the encampment shifted as a scout brought in a whimpering
Regarian. Jena flinched inwardly, but the healer in her stayed professional. “Is
it the parasite?” she asked as the scout helped him onto a cot.
He pulled off his boot. The all-too familiar silvery growth
enveloped most of the Regarian’s foot but the lack of smell told Jena it was
still possible to save him.
“Please,” he whimpered. “Don’t let me die.”
Jena sighed. “You’ll have to follow our rules. That includes
regular usufruit consumption.”
He wrinkled his nose but nodded. “Do I have to swear loyalty?”
“No, but if you don’t cooperate with the medicinal regimen
you’ll have to leave. No exceptions.”
Another healer handed him a bowl full of mush made from the
pungent fruit. Jena touched her bracelet and turned away. What would Joya say
if she could see her treating a Regarian?
It didn’t matter. She hadn’t seen her sister in months, not
since she refused to touch the fruit.
“Do what you want, little sis,” Joya had said. “But getting
us to eat that nasty fruit is all part of a plot to make us weak.”
“That makes no sense. People have eaten the fruit long
before the silver-death. Just not that much of it.”
“If you buy into that Regarian fiction about the silver-death,
it just lets them know you’re easier to control,” Joya scoffed.
“The silver-death doesn’t care if you’re Regarian or
Dyronese. Think, Joya! If the fruit doesn’t work, the worst that will happen is
we’ve eaten smelly fruit and have bad gas. Think of what you risk by not eating
it.”
“I risk nothing. I have my strength and the strength of our
ancestors. Don’t worry, sis. I’ll leave without a fuss. And when I return, I’ll
have stories of battles, and a new bracelet for you.”
Neither Jena nor the other healers showed a sign of the
silver death, despite treating dozens of patients with them. The fruit purged
all but the direst cases of growth. She hoped she’d see Joya at the end of all
this. But for now, she had her wits and her ancestors' instincts of survival. That was, hopefully, enough.
Photo by Jed Owen on Unsplash |
Song Choice: Stay Alive from Hamilton
This flash fiction piece was created as a response to the prompt given for Poets and Storytellers United's Weekly Scribblings post, Writing as a Metaphor for Living. The words I used were mood, plot, and fiction.
Terrific in its own right, and also as an allegory. If only those who need it would get this message!
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DeleteThis is incredibly riveting, Rommy!💝 There is a moral here that needs to be widespread.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa
DeleteYou tell it like it is, Rommy! Although it is written in the third person, the story is firmly told from Jena’s perspective. Your description of Jena is so human in the sentence: ‘Jena flinched inwardly, but the healer in her stayed professional.’ I don’t know what’s worse, a virus you can’t see or sense in any way or a parasite that causes a silvery growth that smells and can only be treated with a smelly fruit.
ReplyDeleteI looked up usufruit and was surprised to see that the word exists. It’s not a fruit! It’s legal thing like a trust that allows an individual to give the freehold of a property to an individual but allows someone else (a life tenant) to use the property during their lifetime. That made me smile.
I love Jena’s reply to Joya: “Think, Joya! If the fruit doesn’t work, the worst that will happen is we’ve eaten smelly fruit and have bad gas. Think of what you risk by not eating it.”
Kim I am delighted that that you enjoyed the story and got to add a cool new word to your life.
DeleteHow relevant is a tale like this as we see some nations and states all over the world failing to sensibly battle the Corona virus.
ReplyDeleteIt's fascinating (in a horrifying way) how many varieties of excuses are given by people to act in a way that endangers themselves.
DeleteThe real hero resides in us all. Could we all be like Jena, a wonderful world results
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Much💙love
Have a lovely day
DeleteExcellent and timely allegory!
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DeleteA brilliant bit of flash fiction!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it.
DeleteThe Joyas of the world fill me with both sadness and frustration. Ignorance, suspicion (even if justified), and the old I-know-better syndrome claim so many lives all the time. It makes no sense. What's the harm in doing something the doesn't hurt if it might save lives?
ReplyDeleteIt's incredibly frustrating, especially given how preventable some things can be. I get really ragey when I think of how easily half truths are manipulated in a way that people become co-conspirators in their own demise.
DeleteJust finished reading this, and in your voice too! All in my mind of course. Not aloud lol ;). It was beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI might be reading this one out loud soon. ;)
DeleteI love the worlds you build. Your dreams must be all dragons and magic! Jena..a woman of faith, Joya...a warrior. I want to see more of these characters.
ReplyDeleteI do have some rather interesting dreams :D
DeleteA healer and a warrior, battling the same world in a different way. A science fiction story.
ReplyDeleteI also read two different points of view as an allegorical tale. Both interesting.
I am tempted to explore both of their views in a longer format, but I will have to see. LOL, if I played around in all the worlds I create, I wouldn't have time for tea!
DeleteA story for our time! Now, if only such a fruit were available for those stricken with Covid-19.
ReplyDeleteWouldn't that be nice!
DeleteInteresting metaphor. Where can I find this fruit? And...what's with the bracelet?
ReplyDeleteThe bracelet was a gift from Joya to Jena, and a reminder of better times.
DeleteA clever parallel to our times. Gas is a small price to pay...
ReplyDeleteA very small one in comparison to the possibilities.
DeleteMirrors our times perfectly! Will there be a brutal second wave and will there still be naysayers...???!
ReplyDeleteI wonder about that as well. Certainly the history books will be interesting. Provided there's anyone left to read or write them.
DeleteSo many takeaways from your piece, Rommy. But how well it depicts the ills of our times! So cleverly captured.
ReplyDeleteThank you Khaya. I was rather ambitious about the nuances I wanted to convey.
DeleteHappy Sunday Rommy
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A good day to you too
DeleteSo are you telling me Regarians had Covid 19 or something like that before us? Oops! I just noticed MMT suggested something similar!
ReplyDeleteLOL, no worries. :D
DeleteA well-written piece that has significant symbolism in it. Well-done!
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteEnjoyed this very much; the story and the metaphor alike.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it
DeleteFruit and masks--sigh--if only those who needed to could read this--wonderfully told!
ReplyDeleteI wish more people would understand, if not my words, then others.
DeleteVery good. :)
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DeletePowerful and relevant. Good piece.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it
DeleteCaptivating!
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DeleteFantastic story. Will there be a Part 2?
ReplyDeleteI love the photo. It makes me hungry for something covered in powdered sugar. A fig, I think.
LOL, maybe!
DeleteAnd I so want some mochi when I look at that picture. :D
Intriguing story, Rommy. Loved reading it, and the creation of the names and fruit was perfect. I could see this as a short story. Excellent!
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