I prefer your kind of crazy
to the sanity the world tries to sell.
I prefer the sound of your tongue
whispering blessings in my sacred grove
instead of droned heartless hymns.
I have no fear of the world
through the looking-glass
as long as you are on the side
I enter into. You
have filled my head with wonders
since the day you stole
into my tower built of doubts.
You told me my hair was magic
and I believed. You
enchant and enflame me,
until I have no choice but to submit
to the mysteries you have initiated me into.
I lay as novice, but rise as priestess,
adept at the skills you have taught me. I
cannot live without your madness -
my armor against the madder reality
I must inhabit. I
must play at sterile sanity
while the eyes of the world are on me,
but when they turn away,
and the stars are the only witnesses
then I will let you kiss me, madly.
And I will kiss back.
Song Choice: Crazy In Love by Beyonce, remixed
This poem was inspired by a prompt given over at Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads: Play It Again Toads where we got to pick an older prompt to work with. I chose the Sunday Mini Challenge based on the poetry of Carilda Olivar Labra, specifically her poem, I go crazy, my love, I go crazy. I've also linked this poem up to Poet's United: Poetry Pantry #369.
Oh how I love that last stanza - oh, the passion!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary
Deleteoh my gosh. i am in love...as are you i take it
ReplyDeleteI am very lucky to be blissfully married
DeleteI love the last stanza. So full of passion and joy. Gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThanks Toni
DeleteCareful ... don't let anyone carry your heart in their pocket!
ReplyDeleteGoing overboard is certainly a danger in any affair of the heart
DeleteWhat a wondrous enchantment
ReplyDeleteThanks Martin
DeleteI lay as novice, but rise as priestess... great line!
ReplyDeleteThat one made me giggle
DeleteHow I love, "I lay as novice but rise as priestess." I remember when someone made me feel that way. How glorious this poem is..........how fortunate to be so in love.
ReplyDeleteI was delighted when I thought of the line :)
DeleteEnchanting poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala
DeleteI want to grab this poem by the waist, run outside, and dance it to the worlds, while screaming, "Yes! Yes! Yes!"
ReplyDeleteThere is not one bit of this piece I don't love.
And the line breaks, the line breaks are purely brilliant!
I tinkered with them to get those breaks to make sense. I am pretty pleased with the result.
DeleteLoved the close on this - it holds so much in so few words.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it
DeleteI love how this poem builds, from a sweet sort of sadness with determination, to such passion and "YES" like I want to end with a fist-pump! Also love the structure of how stanzas 2 & 3 end with "you" and 4 & 5 with "I" and "me" :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for noticing the details I put in! Yep - you got it exactly. *happy dance*
DeleteA great kind of crazy, indeed.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary
DeleteThose two opening lines are a cracker! And the last an amazing affirmation.
ReplyDeleteMarvellous poem, Rommy.
Thanks Kerry
DeleteAll of it is just brilliant! We should look at everyone and believe that same sort of passion is bubbling just beneath in them when no one is looking. Maybe then, we would see that we are more alike than different. Lusty and beautifully written, Rommy!
ReplyDeleteThat is a lovely way to see the world Sharon :)
DeleteLove the falling into madness... such a strong imagery of passion. You know your ways and you did the poetry of Carilda Labra an honor by using that quote.
ReplyDeleteWhoa! That is very high praise. Thanks :)
DeleteHow I love this poem! The freedom (and madness) we find when we find the perfect lover/mate/friend. You capture the passion so, so well!
ReplyDeleteWoot! I'm glad I was able to do that
DeleteMy goodness Rommy, this is wonderfully fiery and passionate!💘 Worth a countless reads!💘
ReplyDeleteAw! Thanks Sanaa
Delete"I must play at sterile sanity while the eyes of the world are on me," I'm feeling that at the moment. It is when I'm alone the sanity gets tainted. Great write!
ReplyDeleteI imagine many creative people are familiar with that feeling
DeleteLove, Love, Love!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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