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I love the concept of dancing with the sakura!
I have been known to twirl under a tree while the petals fall around me.
Oh, I can see that spinning dance!
It's just so gorgeous!
A fabulous capture of the moment between sakura dancing and lying beneath the tree!
It's a wonderful feeling to stop and appreciate the beauty of that moment
WoW you nailed this promptHappy Wednesdaymuch love...
That is indeed an liniminal a beautiful moment.
One of my favorites
That is so beautiful. Such a perfect poem to illustrate liminal space.
Thank you, Lisa
This is so beautiful Rommy! Thank you! Big Hugs!
I'm glad you like it <3
There is so much beauty around us we are very lucky, especially if we open our eyes more often! Beautiful poem Rommy.
Exactly. And sometimes that simple sort of beauty is what feeds our spirit best.
This is beautiful, Rommy. The blooming trees in our back we thought to be dogwood it seems are wild cherry. Their white blooms were such a welcome surprise.
Yay for beautiful surprises!
Clever, neat, Rommy!! Now when a leave falls I will watch more intently the movements of the flight to the ground. Thanks for hosting. As an after-the-cow-got-out-of-the-barn attempt, I found a sort of liminal aspect of my Rooster and Chickens poem...
The fall autumn leaves have their own charm too, yes
Depth, meaning, and a world of beauty in such few words. You have a way with tanka... And I so love how well the form fits the image, the season, and the mood. What magic, indeed...
I had a good time deciding how best to express what I wanted to say, and this form really let me do exactly what I wanted to do.
Oh, a blossoming cherry is poetry! Yours is a skillfully written and magical piece.
Aw! Thanks, Khaya!
Happy Sunday RommyMuch❤love
Hope your Sunday was nice
you described the magic of the sakura so well.i missed it while in Japan but then the autumn maple leaves captured me. :)
I may not ever be able to visit Japan in sakura season, but I'm holding out hope for an autumn visit, someday.
Oh, that floating, flighty dance. You made me see it.
Yay! I'm glad I could!
What a wonderful, drifting, dancing, skipping trip! Beautiful thought!
Thank you Bev
Morning in Central Oregon, thank you for beginning my day in the most rollicking fashion!
Glad to oblige!
A moment worth catching, if possible. Love this!